Internet 24

Self-Published

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Description

Agent Rico, the head of the 24th division of "Internet," is stuck in a room with his pet fish Laurel and forced to go through other agents' accounts of what they face in the strange and unbelievable world. From monsters eating people in the snow, visiting past lives to entering supermarket video game dungeons, Agent Rico has to go through them all in this anthology series.Written By Enrique RosadoArt by Marty Ross

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: The StarfishKing

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 17
Views: 7,728

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Queens_To_Be_CrepesculumRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story is interesting.
The consent is similar to scp, multiple of tales about various anomilus events discoverd by a secret organisation
Story:
The story is made up of lots of short stories, which so far have been pretty horror focused, and are very good
Grammar is my one complaint. The spelling isn't great and especially outside the short stories, the dialogue falls flat sometimes
Style:
This story's style is ... Interesting. The dialogue is written like a script, with the names of characters and their italicized lines, which isn't a bad thing, but makes for an interesting reading experience. A gripe I have about the style is that it prefers expositing descriptions like names and appearance instead of letting the reader infer anything, especially outside the short stories.
Character:
Still not very far in but the characters seem great, for all my gripes about exposition, the story is really good at characterising the people through their actions, dialogue and a few flashbacks. Not a single exposited character trait in sight
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having now discovered the magnus archive, this reminds me of the few episodes I've listened to in all the best ways