In Z Finite
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Description
This is the story of Zarco, a young guy with a magic stone and not much else, and Caelum, a wingless "angel".
"Caelum-That's stupid...
Zarco-Eh, it is..."
Ahem, anyway, a lot of action & adventure awaits them, as they are forced together on a journey in search of some magic stones of legendary power.
"Zarco-Liar! We're currently doing a lot more of "trying to survive" than rock picking around here!
Caelum-Yeah, that is pretty misleading."
Ok, screw this, I am out, if nobody read this story it will be your fault.
"Zarco-The hell are you talking about, you're the one who wrote this...
Caelum-Since our writer is unreliable, I will finish this. This story at its core is just a fun rump, focused on action, adventure, and a lot of comedic dialogue and exchanges. If you had at least a chuckle reading this then you will probably enjoy the story.
Zarco-Yo, thanks for reading till this point, we will meet again at the pages."
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Vam
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 4
- Views
- 10,570
Chapters(31 total)
- 11 - DemonsMar 26, 2022
- 10 - Feathers In The WindMar 25, 2022
- 9 - Fight In The FamilyMar 24, 2022
- 8 - Death & BloodMar 23, 2022
- 7 - Idiot Vs FortuneMar 22, 2022
- 6 - Fortunate BeeMar 21, 2022
- 5 - Escape PlanMar 20, 2022
- 4 - The TrialMar 19, 2022
- 3 - FIGHT!!!Mar 18, 2022
- 2 - The IdiotMar 17, 2022
- 1 - The Island In The Sky And The Angel Without WingsMar 16, 2022
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0with how the author decided to make the characters talk. Most people use " " to highlight when they talk. A few also use ' ' which is fair game. What this site doesn't see too often is when they use -. Let me make an example
Buller
-This is how it would look if I was talking.
Not the most common way to work it and I can't say I am a fan of it. Overall, the length of the paragraphs are way shorter than what feels comfortable and it gets kinda hard for the skim readers. No grammar mistakes spotted, though I was convinced more than a few times that there were some due to the weird sentence structure.
Personality? I would call it stilted. Pretty great premise and okay first few chapters but it does need work before I can start with the praises. 4/5