In Z Finite

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Description

This is the story of Zarco, a young guy with a magic stone and not much else, and Caelum, a wingless "angel".

"Caelum-That's stupid...

Zarco-Eh, it is..."

Ahem, anyway, a lot of action & adventure awaits them, as they are forced together on a journey in search of some magic stones of legendary power.

"Zarco-Liar! We're currently doing a lot more of "trying to survive" than rock picking around here!

Caelum-Yeah, that is pretty misleading."

Ok, screw this, I am out, if nobody read this story it will be your fault.

"Zarco-The hell are you talking about, you're the one who wrote this...

Caelum-Since our writer is unreliable, I will finish this. This story at its core is just a fun rump, focused on action, adventure, and a lot of comedic dialogue and exchanges. If you had at least a chuckle reading this then you will probably enjoy the story.

Zarco-Yo, thanks for reading till this point, we will meet again at the pages."

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Vam

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
10,570

Chapters(31 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • BullerRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    with how the author decided to make the characters talk. Most people use " " to highlight when they talk. A few also use ' ' which is fair game. What this site doesn't see too often is when they use -. Let me make an example
    Buller
    -This is how it would look if I was talking.
    Not the most common way to work it and I can't say I am a fan of it. Overall, the length of the paragraphs are way shorter than what feels comfortable and it gets kinda hard for the skim readers. No grammar mistakes spotted, though I was convinced more than a few times that there were some due to the weird sentence structure.
    Personality? I would call it stilted. Pretty great premise and okay first few chapters but it does need work before I can start with the praises. 4/5