In dc universe with game system
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Description
Michael Rogers wakes up in the body of a 15-year-old who realizes that at DC, he has a game system in his mind that can advance in power faster than others. Knowing the crises ahead, he has to work hard no matter what It cost it!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Dark Prin
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 60
- Views
- 15,694
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- mplaysbgRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Good style and good story. You need to fix the grammar errors and at some places it look like text is missing. You needed to add more info of the original character and other characters. You did't describe how your character looks.
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Status page in chapters 1 and 2 are very different and not detailed enough. please add explanation for them at the end of chapters
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"Battle" in chapter 3 sucks. Normal human with martical art skill vs spor maniac.If you use experience as a way for quick win at least add more details on how things where.
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Character is not logical. You can't just die and start mess with blue screens in your vision without at least for a second think. "Am i crazy?" And what is the first thing you do when in new body and you learn new things? You beat the school sport start with one punch K.O.
Please edit your chapters before you post them. You gramarcheck or something similar. Fix the logical mistakes in the sentences. But the idea is something that i really like so i hope you countinue to write. Even if its like that as long as you are persistent your english will become better the more you edit.