In Danmachi with Plasmids

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2022

Author

Abadom

• Recruitment 1
  May 15, 2022
• Questions
  May 13, 2022
• A night to remember
  May 13, 2022
• My Lucky day
  May 9, 2022
• Scars of battle
  May 3, 2022
• To become more than just a Hero
  May 3, 2022
• Descent into Madness
  May 3, 2022
• The third Level 7
  May 3, 2022
• Aspect of an Ancient Hero
  May 3, 2022
• Stubbornness
  May 3, 2022
• ... And the Future
  May 3, 2022
• The past
  May 3, 2022
• Hand-to-hand combat
  May 3, 2022
• Spar with the Loki Familia
  May 3, 2022
• Loki Familia Manor
  Apr 23, 2022
• One week, but who are you?
  Apr 22, 2022
• Night Visit, a deal
  Apr 21, 2022
• Head of the Hestia Familia
  Apr 21, 2022
• Side Story 6
  Apr 21, 2022
• Contract, the foundation
  Apr 21, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(5)

• Evelyn AdelbergRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I'll start with addressing the only thing I didn't like about this story, and that's the formatting. It is consistent, and intentional, but it requires that tiny bit of extra effort to switch between actions, dialogue and thoughts. I think italicizing the thoughts of the MC could help with the overall flow.
  Grammar wise, it's quite polished. There are tense switches, but that's caused by the formatting I mentioned above, so they make sense.
  I can't really say much on the story apart form the fact that I've enjoyed it. (I'm a bioshock fan, and I have no idea what the other Fandom is, but I had no issues understanding what was going on, although I probably missed all of the references XD). Although I will say, for the Bioshock part at least, the story follows the canon very loosely, so if that's something that bothers you as a reader, I suggest you skip this one.
  As for the characters, I was a bit apprehensive at first when Antoine was introduced, but when he became Silver, he got a lot more redeemable traits, and was over-all a likable protagonist.
  TLDR: a fun read that follows the life and adventures of a twice-reincarnated dude.
• ArcanaVitaeRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I really like the concept of how the mad science of his first life meshed with the new magic of the Falna. It was also neat to see how Silver adapted to the new world, being an adventurer and how he made an impact. Silver's most potent trait is his mentality he's able to to think on his feet, obsess over improvement and consider the effects he has on the world.
• lVlythicRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I read all the way to "Scary Place" (I checked a few chapters ahead) while the story is good, the style is too wonky for me to continue reading. The switching of perspective from 1st, 3rd limited, and 3rd omniscient are way too jagged with no transition, and because of the way every sentence is separated (every sentence other than dialogue is a statement), everything has no/little/unclear mood or tone.
  But the main reason I drop this is because whenever a character speaks or thinks it takes a moment or two for me to guess who is talking, which really takes me out of the story.
• ShadowKnight6992Royal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Okay the grammer in some places needs some touching up because it's not just a wrong letter, no it's just gibberish and especially o some places its an entirely wrong word and just messes a lot up.
  the Mc is good and amazing at the beginning but then it's like the author got bored and tried to rewrite him but make it seem like it was he Mc's actions changing cause reasons so 20+ chapters in it gets bad quickly.
  also the random chapters thrown in between are horrible it goes from a battle to him, 6 days before walking around town, back to the battle. It is just so jagged and really breaks the immersion.
  the plot is everywhere and in shambles, the author just gets every bad guy gives them assassins and sends them after the Mc and still 60+ chapters in and is still getting targeted, also all his knowledge at the beginning ya useless and you can chuck it out the window for 99.999% of the novel, which is hilarious because it's the god damn theme of this novel is the powers and knowledge but nope useless, also the author must've lost his script because the 200+ old Mc turns randomly into a horny idiotic teenager that literally puts himself in the open and brags about every god damn thing he's done and immediately everyone starts sending assassins after him and nothing changes
  Summery this novel is two novels in one, the original good one(0-40) and the downhill dumpster fire(41-60-?) not recommended you'll have your hopes dashed
• KasukageRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  So, there are several things I have to comment on this. First, you constantly have ' on sentences where is is impractical to do so. A lot of the structure is destroyed due to this. To make it worse, you try to justify it by having the narrative in 'this' which makes it both more confusing and worse as those are associated with thoughts.  The main reason I dropped was because mc triggered a pet peeve. You don't just kill someone and justify it by saying they must have committed a lot of crime so boohoo. Mc didn't know anything besides the fact that he was getting robbed. How could he have known she was level two simply from strength? Who said she committed a large number of crime? How is she scum simply for wanting to rob? The fact is he tries to make it seem like she was one of the worst evil people and that he is a hero or a good person for getting rid of her.