Imprisoned in armor within a fantasy world
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Description
A man finds his soul trapped inside a medieval armor without a physical body in a fantastical world. How will he reclaim his freedom and ability to move? Or will he never do so? How will he survive? How will he live? What will he do?
Follow his tale as he ventures within this enchanting and unfamiliar world with his new form, discovering his place and passion along the way.
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English is not my language, so expect a low level in this regard, but I do my best to check and fix errors, so I hope you will help me by highlighting these errors in the comments in order to fix them and develop my language
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Peaceful villager ll
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- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 71
- Views
- 24,854
Chapters(21 total)
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Community Reviews(5)
- Saif EldinRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0تتميز القصة بعمقها وفلسفتها في بناء خيال علمي مميز يتحدث عن عمق النفس البشرية... الكتابة راقية والأحداث عظيمة واعجبتني كتابة الشخصيات... بالفعل تستحق العلامة الكاملة وهذا امر طبيعي فالقروي المسالم دوما يصذمنا بمواهبه القصة تستحق المشاهدةوالقراءة واتمنى لو يصدر القروي لمسالم ... ا لقصة باللغة العربية
شخصيات واحداث وسرد احترافي لو لا ان اللغة ضعيفة - UgleRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Very captivating story. I started reading and could not help wanting for more. If it continues on this track I can confidently say that it is going to be one of my all time favourite reads.
I'm looking forward to what the armor will do to get the action going. Will it be equipped by some soldier or will the lord end up wearing it? Who knows maybe it would gain the ability to move and act by itself.
In conclusion I highly recommend this story. - lex12llRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0For someone who says that he is not good in English, the language is good, there are a few stumbles here and there like changing the letters of names and some few mistakes here and there but everyone makes mistakes, the story so far is good And I liked its idea and the movement between the characters without focusing entirely on Darius, in the end I say that it is a promising story
- Khaled Al-BangariRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5L'histoire jusqu'à présent est bonne avec une idée innovante, et jusqu'à présent le rythme est lent et me convient personnellement, bien que la langue souffre de problèmes ici et là, mais ce n'est pas un problème qui ne peut pas être compris, et le contexte des phrases peut être compris facilement.
J'espère que l'histoire continuera plus longtemps et s'améliorera avec le temps, tout en maintenant le rythme auquel elle marche et ne tombe pas - The GalleonRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5We follow the struggles of a 30 year old man suddenly transported into a place outside of our lands.
The story, overall, mainly suffers from excessive spacing between chapters often alongside words being cut in half over two lines.
The grammar and punctuation are mostly there, of course there are some glaring and not so glaring mistakes but everyone has those.
Overall; the premise is good, the story doesn't break itself in two (though there is slightly abrupt switches of characters but they're easy to see), few but easily fixable issues (i can see).
Therefore I'd recommend people to at least try it out, in resoect to the author and the premise.