Immortality at what cost?

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Description

Fast paced + Cruel Mc + System + Unique in some way + No Harem

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Zhang Wei and his wife Li Xiu, both Qi Cultivation Realm cultivators, have recently given birth to a son named Zhang Ming. Their only wish is for their son to join a prestigious sect and they can rise along with him.

However, their dreams were shattered when they discovered that their son Zhang Ming had a damaged consciousness. Repairing it would require 1,000 spiritual stones, a sum that they could not afford. Realizing they couldn't take care of him for their whole life in this competitive world with no hope of recovery, they decided to abandon their baby by the river.

Hours later, as the abandoned Zhang Ming floated down the river. He suddenly received a system and subsequently awakened his past life memories.

"Can he survive?" "What happened next?" "What type of system is it?"

If you want to know then read novel.

"Read up to Chapter 16; I’ve covered all the details that were previously missing."

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Rip_

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 11
Views: 4,083

Chapters(17 total)

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GinkodomoRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
This novel does not deliver what it proposes.
Reading the sinopsis, you would think it's a xianxia story of a slum rat, probably envolving some eldritch aspects. Cool, right?
But the story is a completly different thing. It is, acctually about, how a crab kills the original system host. Then he cultivates and get stronger. And that's it.
Of course, there would not be a problem if it was what the sinopsis said. But it misleads the reader into a novel completly unrelated to the premise's proposal.
There are some other problems to, like:
The chapters are short.
The characters are unorganic, shallow and rigid.
The logic is anywhere but here. I mean, there is a crab with the brain capabilities of a human being, it can read and knows somethings he shouldn't know.
And, last but not least, the system is not good. The main problem is that it's called "Talent Improvement System", but what it acctualy does is show a display of the user's skills and a tip. There's not even an explanation if it acctually does something other than that.
Besides the obvious quality problems, it is fast paced, cruel, somewhat unique and has a system. I can't say it isn't true, but the truth ends here. The rest is unrelated.
As a reader, I consider this novel misleading.
What is the problem to say what it's acctualy about?