Immortal System: Era of Adventure

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Description

First came the era of magic. Next came the era of the system. From the system came the era of divine spirits. The beginning and end of an era is not known until an era is gone. Zane stands at the beginning of the era of adventure. This story is about the experiences he will have in this era.

First arc

Zane spent more than half of his life preparing for a future with the system. One day the system invited everyone to participate in a trial that was rumored to have creatures from other worlds. The rumors made Zane hesitant about participating, but he decided to go in the end. He knew the trial would offer him the strength he desired, and he had no intention of missing the opportunity. The first arc is about Zane's experiences in the starting village and how they shape his path.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Lord_Azure

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Community Reviews(4)

art_06Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
For those looking for a short review, its a nice novel. Its kind of an interesting take on a system type genre. The fights, in my opinion, were well described and not too long as well as not too short. The system itself seems solid, tho so far I do have a slight worry that the stats might get too high but lets see.
Now, a more detailed review, click the spoiler. ( There arent any spoilers)
Style- For me, the style is very much over fine. It doesnt seem boring in any way and I also think it suits the whole theme of the story. Even tho its mostly focused on zane, it has no problem also showing the pov of other ppl without making the entire thing feel broken up and hard to follow.
Story- As I said above, the story is kinda interesting. Its takes a standard take on a system and integrets it with ppl from other worlds without systems and more, but find out on your own. Its not fun spoiling everything uk.
Grammar- its four cuz some parts are incorrect but those are insignificant and doesnt rlly effect anything so dont worry at all about that. (if you arent the author).
Character- now this is a hard one, as not everyone has the same taste obviously. In my insignificant opinion, I think that the character and actually all the characters so far have an unique but relatable character. None of the characters feel boring and all have a decent part to the plot. You might not like some characters, but I'd say that it doesnt change the fact that the chracter is good. It just doesnt suit ur liking.
Yeah, in the end, it all comes down to, does it suit your taste? I liked it but that doesnt mean you would like it. Imma take a second to thank the author, thank you, and honestly I reccomend you try at least some 15 chs. Who knows, you might not like it at first but like it later on?
ps. I dont rlly write advanced reviews. Dunno if this is good but yeah, trust me and take a chance.
PauljosephskiRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I'm not entirely sure what the plot of the story is at this point. It took almost 40 chapters for the first day at the starter village to pass with nothing super important happening. Alot of the characters are so incredibly annoying you'll want them to die immediately. I'm finding myself skipping large parts of chapters because nothing important happens most of the time
Hillel L.Royal Road
★★ 2.0
I was largely disappointed with this story. While it's coherent, the writing, characters, setting, and plot are all very bland. There's just nothing to get invested in since every element in the story was equally uninteresting. The plot lacks direction and the characters have little to no motivation to do anything. The story has a mishmash of things one expects to see in a Litrpg (classes, levels, skills, items, bloodlines, etc.) without any depth behind them. Everything just kind of exists, and that's it.
TankyouRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
I'm sorry to say it feels like something I would write No hit on you man just the story doesn't flow well I know this review might be lackluster but there's like nothing to talk about The story goes nowhere don't read I've seen stories where people can do what you did in 50 chapters in 10 You need to edit this to and a whole rework
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