Immortal's Lament [Dropped]

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

TheLazyPeasant

• Chapter 2: Giving Fate
  Oct 25, 2015
• Chapter 1: Tortured Soul
  Oct 25, 2015
• Prologue: The End
  Oct 24, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(7)

• TeeShadyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Its fun. And by fun i mean it drains your soul when it torments main character and everyone around him almost 24/7.
• zzazRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  First off, you have a excellent fiction going here. The first thing I look at when reading fictions are the characters reactions, if the reactions are reasonable and logical then I consider the characters to have solid personalities. Unlike other fictions where they abstain from killing because it wrong, without considering the situations. I’m not saying characters can’t kill but have a reasonable backstory like being a monk. I’m giving you a 5 on character because of this reason, but there are instances where their reactions are questionable but its enough for me to accept. Found no promblem with grammer so 5. I define Style as how your story flows, there being fine transitions from one point in the plot to another.  I didn’t feel anything felt awkward, so a 5. For the story content, Its going to represent my opinion of your plot, giving it a 3 and a 1/2 mainly because its not the usual types of fictions I read. Good look, and keep on the good work.
• KansuouRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story is great. I love this story and wanna keep on reading. Keep it up! I'll drop by later ;)
• EvinieRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I absolutely love this story, i can't wait to see more chapters
• bluewoodRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This story is awesome, it has a great foundation that enables limitless possibilities, I can't wait to see where it goes.
• jazzo7Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Amazin just amazing to go dark but not 5 dragon emperor's dark to be able to show beauty in the midst of terror and insanity hats of to you my friend.
• F.DjRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Tell you what, your story scared the shit out of me, thanks God it was just your imagination. I've learned theology half my life, and I've come to known about the true means of Godhood. To think the God was a pathetic existence literally and figuratively  and were tied with worldy matter physically, psychologically and philosophically, that is fuckin SCARY!!! And the ridiculous part is, they can die and create another god. But the worst part is he impulsively create a new gods on a whim from someone whom were mentally sick and kids. I bet this god loved sex like zeus and other mythical god lol,... Aw gotta protect my ass from them LOL.
  And again, thanks God it was your imagination. But it's a nice 'horror' story anyway lol.  A fresh idea among a bunch of reincarnation and VR ideas that filled this site. Nice try, I'll give you five cookies if weren't for the story style was so awful. Shifting POV and first person view only without any creativity. But anything else was good.