Illate and Itra: The Collection

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Description

One boy wishes to become a writer, but his grammar skills are less than desirable. Lucky for him, a classmate who excels at literature offers to teach him. This story will cover the interaction between the writer with no grammar and his classmate and tutor.

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Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2021
Author: Brave-Lizard

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.9/ 5.0
Followers: 11
Views: 18,264

Chapters(53 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

Chaos JesterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is just starting out, but rests its premise on the shoulders of two characters who clearly care for each other. Most of us on here have been writers wanting some help. Maybe with ideas. Maybe with structure and grammar. Some of us have been the one helping.
That leaves us with two relateable characters in a genuinely adorable slice of life. I recommend reading this if you need a relaxing break between the mountains of actions you may be reading on here.
I am excited ti see where Brave-Lizard takes this and have already made sure my notifications will alert me when they do.
I have a good feeling that as the author in the story improves, so will the author writing this one.
HirambeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
While reading a few chapters of this story it felt like I was going through Lizard's mind.
I love wholesome content that make my heart warmer. A peaceful read causing some chuckles at times where Itra portrayed her low tolerance.
Style: First time I can say I genuinely enjoyed a first person writing style at its finest. Executed meticulously giving us a glance of Lizard's imagination.
Story: For people that enjoy slice of life this is a must. Please do yourself a favor and start reading.
Grammar: Honestly, I was very surprised I didn't even find a single error.
Character: I fell for both characters, Itra and Illate have their charm, there's simply no way somebody can find themselves hating these two wonderful characters.
Overall, if you're feeling down start reading this, it'll warm your heart and find peace going through this story.
Eventually I plan on coming back and finishing this story. I would definitely watch this if it became an anime haha this is the type of story I like to see or read when I'm not at my best emotionally.
I'm very happy you liked the cover I made for this fiction and it feels even better to read the story and realize it was way nicer than what I expected.
RonDuneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story does right what it says on the tin: a kid gets himself a writing tutor out-of-nowhere and their friendship blossoms from there. It's all very homely and slice-of-life with no stereotypical "evil" characters and unnecessary drama. The MC is a bit of a doormat, but that fits with his character and his friends make up for it. I especially love how Itra is written!
Grammar is fine, albeit a bit awkward, and sometimes the repition of the short story they're writing can be too much, but I understand what the author is going for.
I'm suprised how underrated the story is on here but I suppose it doesn't have constant godly fights or harems, so it's not typical RR fare.
The Reality Next DoorRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I usually don't read books like this, for the biggest part, I was like, sure, this is fun and I kept on reading. This is a very slice of life book, nothing really major happens and the thing I typically go for is, well, not slice of life, but there is some drama involved.
Style: Some chapters are a bit short, while others are longer. There are also some chapters where the layout is a bit different, I get why, but it did bother me a bit.
Grammar: The grammar was fine, I did notice a few problems like missing capital letters, a wrong tense here or there, and a few missing commas. All in all, most of it can be hand waved while you continue the journey of this book.
Story: It is quite straightforward, it is just as the book says, a person gets tutored. It is best if you just read it for yourself.
Character: I liked the characters and this book focuses a lot on character development.
All in all, if you want a slice of life book that is simple, yet fun to read, then this might just be the book for you. There are many more books to come, as you can see in the latest chapters, there is a lot of content that is planned. I wonder how long it is going to take for all this content to see the light of day.