I Will Be The Harem King!

Self-Published

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Description

He died.

He met god.

He got a cheat.

He went to another world.

He got girls.

That was the short way of saying what the story of our MC Ray Cross is. As for how, when, why and who? Well, you just have to wait and see what happens.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: MZA

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 354
Views: 126,292

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

Thunderpuppy21Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very good, just please change the cover picture it’s so unfitting lol.
hooseurdaddyRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Finally a FairyTail story, chapters seem a little rushed and personality building is starting to get glazed over by vague "two years passed like this" type setups. The time jumps would be more acceptable if there was more development between them, but overall a decent start I'm interested to see where you'll go with it later on in the plot.
Spoiler: Spoiler
Noah NightshardRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I don't understand why someone will give bad review here. Maybe it'll become bad later but for now it's a pretty good story. I recommend it to pass time. I hope the author will continue writing this.
TheCatsPjamasRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Don't understand the rants about reviews and 'MC only wants sex' and such, its what it says on the box. Harem king. He's not going to be aiming for anything different is he?
Good fun read, the glossing over "2 years passed" does feel rushed but I can't say it ruins it. Tad more character development would raise the rating quickly but overall good fun. The creep factor of kissing as kids etc might be worth considering a rewrite for sections but the overall idea should remain the same, get them emotionally invested in the MC at a young age so when he returns, older, they fall for him far more easily. Rather than falling for someone at age 8, which just feels wierd.
3.5/5, will happily re-review with more chapters!
XoShadowoXRoyal Road
★ 1.0
I'd like to preface this review by stating that: I get that this is wishfullfilment you shove into your head to forget your shity life for awhile. I understand that, I do, but holly crap susan do I not want this anywhere near mine or a somewhat healthy head, like wow this is messy.
lets start by what got me reading this. The trending tab on the front page... that's it. I only got to chapter 8 and felt horrible the whole way.
Now "what is wrong with the story?" is what one would ask. Well, everything. It's a semi self aware cliche where a dude get's reincarnated into the world of fairytail with a cheat, as the author puts it. This is actually the best part of the story believe it or not.
Spoiler: Spoiler
Let's go into the main character aka "The Hero" put into quotation marks because he is in no way a hero in the conventional sense of the word. His motivation is sex, which isn't bad persay except it makes for a very flat character. Now the MC works to acomplish his goal by manipulating women when they are todlers into loving him. If this is a self insert someone please arrest the author before it's too late (joke). The author's depiction of kids is highly creepy, flat and dumb not to mention it's as unrealistic as my goals in life.
Back to the MC he got reincarnated as a 3 year old and the problems with a 3 year old body never come up, the kid can benchpress more than me from the start. I get that it's in an anime world that is known for it's fucked up logic but the author doesn't even make a joke about it he just thinks it's normal.
His cheat that he recieves is control over time and space which literally makes him a god. That makes every event in the story meaningless since consiquences do not exhist along with a rewind button. This is basically a powerfap fic. from then onwards.
Onwards we go, now here is where I run into a problem. I only read till he reduced Ezra to an alien who uses "kyaa" in their thoughts. I'm sure I can bitch about alot of stuff further into