I was Bored So I Became The Antagonist In a VR Game

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Description

its the year 2042 and Virtual reality has reached new hights. The human race is addictaed to the new game " Expanding stars online" (ESO). Xiler is a 17year old hardcore gammer, who after 3 years of farming and gaming has finally secretly become the strongest force in the game. What will he do next?

NOTE FROM ARTHUR

Hey I wanted to give writing another try. the last time i wrote one this site I was in school so I had to drop the story, but im hoping I can get through this story. Not very long chapters, maybe give something people can read between while waiting for other books. lol my native language is english but my spelling sucks. so I am very sorry for spelling mistakes, grammer, or a missing word. the last book I did was " lord fear" here on the site. lol I can show you better then i can tell you.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: bloody

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 175
Views: 69,773

Chapters(25 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

WaytocoolRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Finnaly some child death, I was starting to get bored.
ShuuRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I’ve been looking for a actual grimdark tale with a villain like mc for a while and this so far has been stratching that itch quite wonderfully. Definitly chem it out when you’re also in that mood.
nugyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If you can get past some grammar mistakes etc, which arent that hard to just ignore, the story is amazing, its all from the point of a kind of an insane person with money and power, but to find out more you have to read, MC is insane, SO GET TO IT GENTS
Volker HuetterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The one and only true antihero! Here you get what your searching for!
toolazytobreatheRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Story is interesting maybe except real world events that are in the story. The MC mafia boss son is a bit cringy .When you read that 17 year old orders around squad of goons and controls his own district.
The grammar is beyond average especialy at the begining of the story. In the later chapters i think it becomes better.
MC is interesting, but his reasons for revenge are childish, but he's psycho so probably any reason for him is good enough.
I have to admit i'm sucker for empire managment stories so it's quite easy for me to like the story that's about it.
Have fun!
TelRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
An actual open game means frankly it's unfair.
holier than thou jerks can grief.
monsters can flip the status quo.
However slim the chance or tiny the window anybody can put the work in, take the risks, and take the world by storm if they find all the right ingredients.
And it is done so far even with a bare beginning really really well.
And that's the good.
The bad?
(anti-hero)(grim)(dark) The story is really well done, but because of that these tags are also really well done. The darker side of story telling so you know...fair warning.
MoretaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
They shall be of use while reading this story. Some ellipsis also could be helpful. Those smal missing bits cause sentences to flow weirdly even when overall they are constructed properly... but frequently they aren't. Generally it wuld do author good to find some typesetter as it's hard to enjoy idea while getting tangled up in awakard sentences.
It's quite obvious that it's the first work by this autor, and one can assume that as it progresses both style and plot would become smoother as writer gains skill.
All that said I didn't have tentacity to read futher than 6 chapter, sorry.
pewpewcachooRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Honestly it's okay. The MC is a little to edgy for me, and it doesn't make sense to me. He told his NPC a story about some boy, I am assuming is the MC and being betrayed by a girl and some guild in game. His childhood friend from what it sounds like. But then he is like the son of a mafia boss in real life? So the girl who betrayed him, most likely knew this or at least knew he came from money and yet betrayed him? It makes no sense at all. Then his in game actions are just weird.
I think people like this because the MC is an edge lord.