I Reincarnated as a Black Hole

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Description

A certain boy dreams of becoming one like the protagonist he admires from a story, just like everybody else does. He lived his whole life in his own fantasies until he grew up realizing that the delusions of his are not ever going to happen.

One day, after he finally recovered from his past self and started to work as an adult, he woke up in a pitch-black space from who knows where.

Could it be that the time has finally come for him?

This is the story of a boy who finally stepped into another level realm of his dream fantasy.

The Story and Illustrations can also be read here: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/593181/i-reincarnated-as-a-black-hole/

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: VoxZeno

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Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 25
Views: 12,036

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

docter zRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
uhhh whos zelvis and igiki seriosly pretty good the it restarted i ii i i i ii i i i i i i ii i i i i ii ii i i i i i i i i iii o ioo oi i o i ju j nh i i ii i i i i i i ii i i i i ii i i ii i i i ii i i i io i ii i ii i i ii i ii i i ii i i i i i i i
I am not hereRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
TLDR: interesting premise with a dull, and poorly put together execution.
The concept may have been a good one. A person becoming a blackhole could go any number of ways with nigh infinite possibilities. However, that potential is squandered here. The grammar is poor, the Main Character feels mostly lifeless, and nothing is going on. It goes on and on and on about what he is and what is going on without making any of it interesting. He gains "knowledge" but we don't see any of it until he exposition dumps how he got into his situation. He talks about his humanity, but sounds more like a robot with how he talks. He claims to be literal billions of years old and passes it off as mere seconds. Nothing seems to matter here.
On top of all that, the grammar is poor, and you have randome emoticons shoved into some places to show the character's emotions.