I Married Muzan Kibutsuji (Demon Slayer Fanfiction)
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Description
Time travelled to Taishou Period of Japan, Teru felt very lucky that he got married to such a gorgeous wife.
She was perfect, except that she couldn't be exposed to sunlight due to a mysterious illness.
Her name was Kibutsuji Muzan.
Tonight at the street, they bumped into a young, gentle swordsman with unique earrings.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Asyouwish0203
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 61
- Views
- 62,894
Chapters(21 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(3)
- LUKESKYDRINKERRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0A very interesting story, what more can I say than I wish you good luck with your story and always have a creative fire or something familiar
words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words words - Hollow manRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5For Fan Fiction, it is a very good story.
Here are some complains:
1-Muzan is referred to as "Demon King" and not "Demon Queen", despite being female in this story.
2-Gyokko does not have bottles, he uses vases.
3-There should be more exposicion when it comes to how the timeline and worldbuilding differs from the original story. Here is some examples: People with the mark die when they reach 30 instead of 25, Rengoku does not die, the Mugen Train Arc and the Entertainment District Arc do not happen. Some other minor things that I don't remember.
4-The big twist in the end of the story could have used more foreshadowing.
5-The Mc's relationship could have been given more focus? Like It was nice and sweet, but it could have been given more time to develop. - OogaChoogaRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Original review at chapter 2:
Funny premise. This is one of those story's that are just driven by misunderstandings. Of course I could be wrong as it's only be 2 relatively short chapters. The MC is crazy OP and will only be getting stronger. I think that if this story is too remain good it will have to heavily rely on character interaction since the MC has a system that makes him OP for doing nothing.
Official review after finishing:
I finished the story and I stand by the rating. While the MC is wildly overpowered this story doesn't focus on that which saves it. The premise is very nice but executed not perfectly. This story which main focus is on the characters, makes it a little hard to connect with those characters. The timeskips are somewhat jarring and make it a bit difficult to know when things are happening. This could be fixed by different behavior after the timeskips but their relation ship seems to stay consistent for most of the story only upticking in the last 5 chapters. I think that the interactions that were shown were quite nice but it feels as though the ones shown were the only interactions happening. If that were the case the amount of feelings they have for each other should be less.
I am willing to suspend my belief but the way Muzan latches onto him for seemingly no reason seems a bit iffy.
But regardless of that I enjoyed the story a great deal and would suggest it to anyone who enjoys a short, fluffy romance or just demon slayer in general.