I´m the Dog of a young Mageknight

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Description

After a long and happy life ended it wasn´t the end, i was reborn as a dog. After a family took me in. As the daugther´s Dog will i become a blessing or a curse to the Family. This is my first try at an web novel, this is an reader interacive one so please comment and help the story to develope. English is not my native language so please correct all mistakes i make, so that i can develope as a writer as well.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
RasterG

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
374
Views
210,525

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • HexwolfxRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I want to read more chs plzzzzzzzzz
  • KinsiecoolRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love it, love the interaction, Love the characters. Super awesome story, and storyline! Sure, the grammar needs a little help, it is a golden story that is a amazing read. I like the fact that you let us, the readers decide what magic our floofer MC can make his own.
  • Noir LightRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    I really like the story but there were some grammer mistakes. I love the idea of the Main character being non-human and a familair, that was just some great creative thinking. I hope the MC stays as a non-human with no transformable form of human cause I get kinda tired of reading things like that but if not it is still a good story to read. :)
  • DyonevaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    There are a few grammer mistakes
    Die: dice
    Destine: Destiny
    it looks good... for now
  • RagNarokRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I am not sure how to feel about the story it didn't necessarily bring out any emotion in me while reading it like some action FF yet it didn't feel it lacked anything so far. I think it's still to early to completely judge this but i guess it's good enough to recommend people to check it out.
  • CreatureDukeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I like it,though my only request is that you keep him an animal for the whole story or at least something similar.Also I wouldn't mind it if you add other summons or pets. It would be cool to have a story where all the pets hate  each other but the owner doesn't know it. A cool plot device thing you could do is that an evolution reverts him back to the stage of right after birth instead of just changing form.
  • AShyLeecherRoyal Road
    0.5
    Disclaimer: This review score is not an accurate representation of actual quality and was put as such to lower the overall score to where ot should be after taking into account the other artificially high review scores.
    Actual Scores:
    Style: 3.5 The author is no dedicated wordsmith nor smooth operator but they are still better than some shit I’ve seen published and successful
    Story: 3 The problem with walking down a well traveled road is having to contend with those that came before and some of the author’s attempts at humor near gave me an aneurism
    Grammar: 3 It’s a bit bad with mistakes like barley>barely so on so forth
    Characters: 3.25 Honestly can’t pin down some of these characters and what they’re supposed to be, and not in a good way
    Overall Score: 3.25 Author is trying and definitely isn’t in last place but there’s no participation prizes in this race.