I love this world (Complete)

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A man gets thrown into an alternate world after what was supposed to a harrowing escape from death. Follow him as he uses his knowledge from his previous life of research to adapt and survive in a place that is void of human contact, only to find out later how absurdly ridiculous his abilities are. Journey alongside this man as he attempts to change the new world for a better place, to turn it into one that he loves. PS, it will follow the reincarnation template very closely in the beginning (what do u expect? this is RRL), but will deviate from it as the story progress Warning: Crude language

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2015
Author
Mrsound

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYTRAGEDYSCI-FIROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFEPSYCHOLOGICAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
1,605
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2,182,654

Chapters(92 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • sabazurcRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    love your story, one of the best action story on this site….take this 5 star rating from me.  so much better than many shitty action stories with pathetic main lead on this site. hope you will continue and will not drop this story even after 3.28 chapter.
  • F.DjRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    You asked for a rating so here you go your five cookies. And about the review, I particularly don't have anything to say, it was a great ride and I enjoy it till now. Thank you for the hard work!
    Btw, frankly it kinda surprise me why your story didn't dominate the chart. The story was epic but not that epic, it was like a soap opera in battle version (but still felt like a soap opera), it's too light, lack of mystery and far from complicated. It's like seeing Mike Tysons all smiling and no punch, yet it still a great read.
    Maybe it all because you targeting younger reader and the easy going one? Then I say you are succeed in doing that! If this is a food then this story is the kind of food that anyone can enjoy. Well done!
  • MxousRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I'm not one for long reviews but I enjoyed every chapter so thanks for writing it.
  • reinydayRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    interesting character, premise and story. definitely worth reading. thank you author for the great story!
  • CaskieRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This book is incredible, it is interesting, fairly original and is even fairly scientifically correct (as far as I know), so this book gets four and a half stars. I'll be brief, the characters are well developed, the fight scenes are interesting, the MC is fairly OP, what more could you ask for. The only reason this wasn't a five star rating is because of the ending. The ending, without major spoilers, seemed in my opinion to be rushed and forced as well as sad. The failure of the MC at the end, is irritating to me as it completely undermines the whole storyline, the MC eventually overcoming everything, as at the end he fails. This anticlimax , where the MC fails despite conquering every other obstacle in his way, it leaves a sour aftertaste after reading the entire novel. I am sorry to those who disagree, this is just my opinion, but the ending to me, while not ruining the novel for me,  still causes it to irritate me.
    Thank you for an otherwise awesome novel.
  • Raj MahalRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is well written and flows nicely. The world building is great and the characters are awsome. I really like the way the author has merged physics and the 'magic' of the new world. I would highly recommend this for anyone who doesnt mind losing themselves for a couple of days as once you start you can't stop.
  • LW130003Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story is written in descriptive manner with a lot of details and explanation. The world building in this fiction is well made and you can find more explanation in the glossary.
    The story has interesting start where the MC, Kiefer, is killed and reincarnated (or transported) to new world with magic, For your information, the MC does not start from baby. Afterwards, Kiefer try to self learn magic by combining it with knowledge he has from the old world (physics, chemistry, linguistic and others) and exploring the world to gather knowledge. His current goal is to open dimensional pocket to return back to his old world to reunite with his parents.
    The grammar is good and easy to understand, although sometimes there are jargon from physics and chemistry but all of those jargon are either famous or something that has been learnt from high school, such as einstein’s relativity formula e=mc^2, hydrogen, carbon, etc. so there should be no problem in reading.
    The MC, Kiefer, has similar personality to Alvin from the alchemist with less bitching and better sanity. Just like Alvin try to understand everything with biology in that world, the Kiefer also has great thirst for knowledge and approach magic with physics (nature phenomenon) and linguistic (incantation, runes and others).
    Thanks for writing this interesting story.
  • mentalpersonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The story is decently written with fair grammar however there simply is little to nothing that is able to elicit excitement from the audience. I was unable to have much feelings for the characters beside mild annoyance.
    I left at 2.3
  • Mashuk Yasar PrioRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Honestly it's start out good. Plot was good but everything was too rushed ! And i hate this ending ! Author actually follow cliche few times. Honestly don't read or you'll ruin your mood.
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    I don't think it was wise to kill protagonist in the end.
  • Galaleo KriegRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    WARNING: The ending of this review will have spoilers for the entire story.
    (Edited for broken spoiler button)
    Overview: (For the down and dirty review)
    The style is above average, with a similar level of grammar. The story starts well, becomes great, and then crashes and burns. The only saving grace for my time wasted was the Characters which I adored. They developed as much as millennia-old creatures can. I DO NOT recommend this story. I somewhat outline my issues in this review and completely state them in the spoiler section.
    Style:
    The style of writing from the author starts out a little stiff and develops well. It degrades more towards the ending but overall was done well.
    Story:
    The concept is nothing new. It starts with reincarnation and goes into an OP fun-filled adventure with a good overarching plot. The story has an okay if slightly hurried pacing that quickly picks up speed to something lacking a sensible direction. The story starts to quickly derail at this point. It ends horribly and ruins any sense of enjoyment I was gaining from the story. It felt like a complete waste of time. The story review will continue in the spoiler section.
    Grammar:
    While nothing fantastic, the grammar is solid throughout and leaves little to be desired.
    Characters:
    By far the highlight of this story. The MC is fun, smart, and a bit sadistic to the ordinary people he meets on his journey. You'll find yourself enjoying the variety of his entourage and their interactions. The Titans are fun and powerful, the mortals can be entertaining even when accompanying the MC and his Titans.
    Again WARNING HEAVY Spoilers!!
    While the book starts off well it devolves into something that left me hating this book. At the end of the second book, the author decided to introduce a spacecraft of human colonists headed for the MC's planet. This becomes a major part of the plot towards the end of the story.
    The story climaxes with the MC and his group and the new humans using the spaceship to fight