I got reincarnated and got a creation cheat

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Description

An abused child died to his father and mother. His mother wanted him dead the moment his birth and said he is a mistake. His father did drugs and gambled when he lost he abused him. He didn't even have a name he was 5 when he died to abused he then woke up in a white room and saw a man standing in front of him in greek clothes and looked a bit holy. The man said to him " I'm sorry I didn't want you to die and accidentilly killed you forgive me sorry I will give you a new life with better parents and a cheat. now watch adventure the world and use his cheat and enjoy his life with better parents.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
andrewmarcel

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.3/ 5.0
Followers
141
Views
262,288

Chapters(61 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • BaniRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    his character adds exciting
    I like the story
  • Yami SeekerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story was amazing while the author can not write to its best potential it is still good. Rather than complaining this people should be thanking that it is understandable. The chapters have gotten longer and its quite interesting and ejoyable. More like a slice of life with god version. I would recomended more if they grammar improved but its hard to improve in that area. I have difficulties myself.
    *Don't be scared off by the ratings. They are just people that have terrible english and can't understand when you remove a single letter from a word.
    *UPDATE!* (12/2/2017)
    -Have improved sentence structure. (For now, it is below decent but better than the terrible quality from the beginning.)
    -Made the story less confusing and more understandable. *Claps*
    -Stopped making run on sentences. (Sentences that never end or in other words no periods or comma.)
    -Improved in using commas although there are still quite a few mistakes on them. (,)
    -Properly used periods (.) and quotes ("").
    -Improved spelling (I didn't find a whit here. ("with" is the proper form) As well as not many words had mistakes.)
  • HelloFromHollandRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Ill just say this for a 14 year old your doing a great job.
    Yes the grammer could be better but hey your still learning the ropes.
    And i have to say i like the story and the characters alot its not slow like alot of story's i read.
    i hope that you will be uploading alot more from now on seeing as i will be reading this to the end and the story's you make after this.
    and to the negative nansy's out there that read this go read something else and get a life and if your thinking i can do a better job then this 14 year old THEN WHY ARENT YOU and if you have send me the link to your story ill read it and rated it by comparing it to a brave 14 year old that has the guts to do what he likes.
  • Shadow8tingRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Prety good the sentence structures give alot to wish for and there isnt much character.development. but as a slice of life it is prety good and geting beter as it goes.
  • KydsdadRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Really like the story idea so far.  However the grammar is terrible.  i assume the author isnt native englisg speaking so the problems are understandable.  Wish there was a bit more depth the the characters as well.  Keep it up some good potential here.
  • AzurenoldRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    OK. From previous comments I can tell that due to your age, some grammar mistakes are inevitable. Storyline is not that bad. Characterisation is hard to understand due to the grammar 'problems' (don't worry it will fix itself with time). Hopefully, this will motivate you.
  • kirosyamchaRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    well definatly needs to work on grammer and such, like badly! definatly seems like a non-english speaker so if your fine with that then its ok.
  • wassieRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Short and simple: Lots of typo's, How can a five year old person suddenly know what anything else (Ei, what creation entitles, what a status would mean or the values etc.) It jumps where the charcter is... I'm only bloody 3 chapters in and i quit... Sorry lad.
  • MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    This story is so all over the place.
    The Grammar is horrendous.
    The Plot/story is borderline non-existent.
    Reading this, I feel like I am developing ADHD. Like I have somehow, gained, cancer. Of the Brain.
    I'm still reading, still keeping up to date. But, in the way you cannot look away from a trainwreck...
  • 1lyric4uRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    The story concept is good, but to be honest I can't wade through the grammar issues it has. Once that's cleared up I'd love to visit the story again. I'd also like to see longer posts. I like to sepnd at least 7-15 minutes reading a chapter.