I Came, I Ran

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Description

As they were summoned, the old king in front of them said to the "Young heroes, I have summoned you here to fulfill a great prophecy, you have to defeat a coming evil, foretold by the by our High Priest, Ursum."

The heroes, as observed by the king, looked around the room, and said out loud "Where are we?"

"You are in the great kingdom of Vo-". Unfortunatley the king stopped before he could end the sentence.

There was a dagger sticking out of his skull...

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This is my first story, constructive critism is appreciated and wanted.

So please, help me, I am drowning in a thing called incompetence.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: YaBoiBoy

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Rating: 3.1/ 5.0
Followers: 61
Views: 30,038

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Community Reviews(3)

Quartz RingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I loved reading about thirty one and his slighty psychotic tendencies and disregard for people as a whole it was an amusing ride that im sad ended without finding out what happened
BullerRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I read this for the simple reason of it playing a joke on a very standard trope in this genre. Students gets summoned to the world, king greets them with a grand quest, and they all dally off to do whatever. That's definitely not what happens here, that king getting shut up so dang quickly that you never really got to hear what he had to say. Sure, it might have done well without it, but I do really like that idea. Grammar is fine and style is on the eh side of things. 4/5 from me.
EtherialEphemeralRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I changed my review.
A good story!, Characters are either stereotype or anti-stereotypes, Which is actually pulled off greatly.
The only problem I have is the grammar. Though it doesn't make the story THAT shitty, it's still distracting.
That plot twist at the very start is already very interesting, keep at it!
Hoping for more~