I am the system

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Looks like I got banished to mortal world with no cultivation,

Run over by a car! I will get my revenge against you Subaru… ehh what’s health insurance… huhh what’s a ‘system’…

In Soviet Russian the MC doesn’t have a system, the MC is the system.

Chapters(25 total)

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(3)

  • Hopefullsnow01Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Keep up the good work i can see a lot of potential in this and i hope you don't drop it. If you ever need anyone to bounce ideas from i am free to contact, I would to see how this goes as there arnt a lot of system were you are the system.
  • JaspreRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    An Isekai told from the point of view of a brand new system with their first host. Rational, with some heart, and none of that "I shall slaughter the world and burn the heavens!" nonsense. Overall the story flows well, has few grammar flaws, and has sympathetic characters you can actually root for.
  • black LeviathanRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The story started fine and all, promising a slow-burn novel about slowly getting stronger with the protagonist being told he will need many hosts to even master the basics of being a system.
    However, it seems the author has become impatient with his own novel, suddenly introducing centuries old emperors planning invasions and dragon clans detecting the protagonist and wanting to destroy him. It is just so sudden and goes against the whole atmosphere and setup of the rest of the novel.
    It is like an RPG, where you are told you need to grind 1 week to reach lvl 10. And then telling the player, who grinded for a day to lvl 2 "By the way, the end of this week a lvl 7000 boss will attack you. If you lose, then you account gets deleted." The only way to survive this is to cheat (plot armor) or introduce ridicolous plot devices like "This boss has a fatal weakness. Pocking him with a wooden stick will instantly kill him."
    That being said without this the author is skilled at making realistic and interesting character interactions and making a slow, but interesting plot. Without these sudden POVs I would give this novel 4,5/5 stars, with my only complaint being that there are not enough chapters.
    So, please SciFine, don't try to add sudden dramatical plot directions to add tension through a looming threat, in my opinion the appeal of this novel is being immortal and carefree and assisting and watching the life of the host.