I am a dragon! Help me! (TOME 4 of the TIAMAT'S WARS SERIE)

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NOTE FROM ME : If you don't understand the start of the story, this is normal... There are flashbacks and flashforward chapters explaining the situation like a veil. In this story, you'll be pertubed by the time line going to the future and to the past. This is normal. The continuum of time and space is broken because of someone....

Here, I can see in the dark and I'm on all fours. I have claws and a long neck and a tail and wings. Argh - ROOOAAAAAARRR ???????????????????What is happening to me? HELP!Druid's maze 2018, Druid's maze ...I was waiting for my friends at the dragon cave, sheltered from the rain. I saw a light and here I am, around 699-700 in the early middle ages!I am only 6 years old...Mummy!Doudouuuuuuuu!AUTHOR WARNING. I speak french and I help myself with online translators.Some words may be misinterpreted like Wrist Wrap = Dragonness and Di.. for TAIL..So if you found these words, please inform me and I will correct ASAP .If it hurts someone, I will correct it also. Thank you for understanding.

(TOME 2 of the TIAMAT'S WARS SERIE) can be read separately

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Status: Completed
Year: 2022
Author: The Devourer

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Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 25
Views: 52,266

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Desu_VultRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
It comes off pretty fast paced which im not exactly against, but the thing that throws me off is the MC is supposed to be a 6 year old, yet within the first chapter im not sure if they are 6 or 60.
they have moments where they are clearly a child, yet the next moment they are pulling out exact measurements and skilled procedures out of nowhere.
like he gets his exact dragon measurements without any frame of reference, marks his path so he doesnt get lost and can skillfully hunt fish with his new tail.
and I am supposed to believe this is a 6 year old?
I want to like this story but the first chapter threw me off with how the MC is so...
JahithRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I've read first few chapters of this story and I have few things to say
Positives:
I am impressed with the lyrical fertility of the author. Not everyone puts up 40+chapters in a week. And as flawed as the story may be In my heart I belive that with practice like that the Author will refine their wordshop and tools within.
Many may criticize this story for being bad in one way or another but few of such people took steps to actually create something. Dear Author for that quality alone you have rizen above such criticisms. Take pride in the fact that you have created something.
Negatives.
As mentioned before Story is flawed. It reads fast like a galloping steed without giving the reader a chance to take a breath.
It Suffers from the notorious "and then" syndrome. Tell us the readers why the things that are happening, happen?
I strongly advise the author to sit down before posting a chapter. Read it again, and see if there are some descriptions that could be added. As a reader I do not live in your head and as such I do not know what you are thinking. I do not see the the images that flash in your mind when you tell your story. Imagine that I am a blind and deaf child that you can only talk to through text. Tell me how your world smells. How it looks. Tell me about the texture of the world that you try to present to me. Tell me about the people in this world. What they think. What they worry about. What they want. Why they want it and why they can't have it. You don't have to do all of this at once but use those ideas to decorate the rooms in the castle of your story.
Do not get discouraged and good luck ^_^