Hunter’s Vengeance: The Rise of the Predator

Self-Published

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Description

Kara is a hunting prodigy. Or rather, she was born for hunting. But in a world where combatant classes have a considerable advantage over others, she, with her Hunter class, which is considered semi-combatant, will always be destined for an ordinary life.

Will Kara be able to find happiness living an ordinary life? Well, Kara herself gives us the answer: "Absolutely not!"

So, when she discovers a family inheritance that holds a well-guarded secret of the Hunter class, she decides to embark on a path that will defy the order of the world.

*Additional tags: Yuri (Girls Love, GL), Harem (Girls Only Harem)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Cantis

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 305
Views: 105,330

Chapters(54 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Mattf8675Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far, I have found this to be a really good story. I have not found more than one minor incongruity which is easily fixed. The main character is well thought out and quite fun to read about as well as follow along in her Journeys. I am looking forward to reading more about how this main character progresses as well as the different aspects of the world that she's in.
NorohRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall: This story is not trying to be Game of Thrones, and does not pretend to be. This is a fun, popcorn munching, sex, drugs, and rock n'roll type of story. It is an explicit lesbian power fantasy that is unashamed and unconcerned about being anything else. The MC is OP, the violence is graphic, the smut is gratuitous. If that is what you are looking for you have found it. Still early days but shows promise.
Style: Nothing groundbreaking here. The prose is generally clear and straightforward, though it occasionally shifts into dramatic verbosity. Especially when describing the women, even outside of the smut. The sex scenes are very dynamic, and even when it feels muddled it comes accross more as if the characters living it are muddled rather than the author's mistake. One aspect I am on the fence about is the very occasional fourth wall break by the author in some descriptive paragraphs. On one hand if cultivated and expanded upon I can see it being a fantastic stylistic choice to set the tone of the book. On the other hand, as it is now it feels random and disjointed. I look forward to seeing if it is dropped or developed. One critique is the dreaded block of exposition in diologue that occasionally pops up, such as when the father explains things or when the first love interest gives her backstory. This could be broken up more with other characters asking questions, or played for laughs with a well timed 4th wall break in the narration afterwards, but feel clumsy as they are.
Story: The story is largly bare bones this early, setting up the character, her powers, and the first of her loves. Everything is as you would expect, with the notable exception of a wonderful love triangle executed in the first few chapters that serves as both an inciting incident and character study for the MC. I do think the first love interest post power-up falls a bit to hard and fast, but I otherwise like the set up and I find the breezy pace of the story part of its charm.
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