Hunter of Vengeance

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

DaritanX

• Chapter 26- Afterlife
  Oct 22, 2024
• Chapter 25- The End
  Oct 20, 2024
• Chapter 24- Battle at the Reservoir
  Oct 18, 2024
• Chapter 23- Highway Fight
  Oct 15, 2024
• Chapter 22- Revelations
  Oct 13, 2024
• Chapter 21- Storytime
  Oct 11, 2024
• Chapter 20- War
  Oct 8, 2024
• Chapter 19-Two-Headed Werewolf
  Oct 6, 2024
• Chapter 18- Moving Upstairs
  Oct 3, 2024
• Chapter 17- George Kun
  Oct 2, 2024
• Chapter 16- ARC Under Attack
  Sep 28, 2024
• Chapter 15- Dinner with the Vampire
  Sep 27, 2024
• Chapter 14- A New Lead
  Sep 24, 2024
• Chapter 13- Ben's Story
  Sep 22, 2024
• Chapter 12-Going Back Inside
  Sep 20, 2024
• Chapter 11: Fight in the Lobby
  Sep 17, 2024
• Chapter 10-Meeting the Demon
  Sep 14, 2024
• Chapter 9-Escape
  Sep 13, 2024
• Chapter 8-Under Siege
  Sep 13, 2024
• Chapter 7-War Council
  Sep 12, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• LiarbytradeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really like the new-age noir tone you seem to be going for.  Derek's got that kind of coarse wit, which really suits the genre, and a lot of the minor characters seem well fleshed out, despite their limited screen time.  My only problem was I thought it could use a bit more polish.  Some of the punctuation wasn't as tight as it could have been, and a few of your word choices could have been punchier.
  For example, take this line:  "I dropped some cash on the table for the drinks and headed inside to the small gift counter they had just for tourists."  You probably should have used 'small gift shop,' instead - especially, since it'd let you avoid reusing the word in the next line.
  Other than small issues like that, though, I thought it was pretty good.  It's definitely a work to keep an eye on.  Great job and good luck!