Hunter of Vengeance

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

DaritanX

• Vol2- Chapter Eleven- Escape
  Sep 28, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Ten- Vera
  Sep 25, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Nine- Suspicions
  Sep 23, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Eight- Riven
  Sep 21, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Seven- Intruders
  Sep 17, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Six- The Dragon
  Sep 16, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Five- Mara
  Sep 13, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Four- Kelly
  Sep 11, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Three- Descent
  Sep 11, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter Two- New Friends and Old
  Sep 10, 2025
• Vol2- Chapter One- Movie Night
  Sep 9, 2025
• Epilogue
  Nov 9, 2024
• Chapter 34- A Burning Sensation
  Nov 9, 2024
• Chapter 33- Blessed of War
  Nov 7, 2024
• Chapter 32- History :Lesson
  Nov 5, 2024
• Chapter 31- FIGHT!
  Nov 2, 2024
• Chapter 30- Infiltration
  Oct 31, 2024
• Chapter 29- Spells, made to order
  Oct 29, 2024
• Chapter 28- Catching up with the Wizard
  Oct 28, 2024
• Chapter 27- Jailbird
  Oct 27, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• LiarbytradeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I really like the new-age noir tone you seem to be going for.  Derek's got that kind of coarse wit, which really suits the genre, and a lot of the minor characters seem well fleshed out, despite their limited screen time.  My only problem was I thought it could use a bit more polish.  Some of the punctuation wasn't as tight as it could have been, and a few of your word choices could have been punchier.
  For example, take this line:  "I dropped some cash on the table for the drinks and headed inside to the small gift counter they had just for tourists."  You probably should have used 'small gift shop,' instead - especially, since it'd let you avoid reusing the word in the next line.
  Other than small issues like that, though, I thought it was pretty good.  It's definitely a work to keep an eye on.  Great job and good luck!