Hui Lin: Speechlessly Cultivating
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Description
On a certain unnoteworthy day, a youth of dubious moral character fell to his death from the third floor of an apartment complex. The incident came as no surprise to the residents nearby, who had long since kept a betting pool of when the little pervert would break his neck.As the youth lost his grip on the drainpipe and plummeted, he only regretted that he wasn’t able to peek one last time at the housewife’s finely toned body.Then everything went dark.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 184
- Views
- 65,076
Chapters(21 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Brian LeeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0‘Hui Lin: Speechlessly Cultivating’ delivers an entertaining account and perspective on the main character. This series is an excellent read for anyone who enjoys the supernatural genre. While organizational incongruities plague some of the earlier chapters, many of the shortcomings of the first two chapters were alleviated by later chapters. These problems are only a minor distraction to the story being told.
The construction of the chapters meshes well with its organization and lends itself successfully to the story line of each character. All chapters are composed of several defining parts that maintain a sense of continuity throughout the volume. The series is well-referenced, making skillful use of first-person sources.
Great series overall. 10/10. - septwolvezRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Overall the series is a entertaining read and definitely worth the time spent reading. Give it a try
- FrustratedEgoRoyal Road★★★ 2.5At first I must admit I laughed. Not at chapter one, but at chapter two. Chapter one was only funny near the end. Still reading both kept me amused enough to read through all the currently released content which means something. The comedy tag stands out heavily with this one, far more so than any currently established romance - which only means that theres girls in there somewhere, but doesn't actually equate to 'romance' as a XX may consider it, or any other adult who's successfully romanced someone. This tag specifically is poorly used - here and elsewhere.
Chapters are short, however. Those seeking a large amount of content to wile away the hours may want to seek elsewhere until more chapters are released. The format is what I like to call 'a mimicry of eastern translated works' - which is to say it's very watered down and basic in both description and conversation.
In one chapter there's a boar dies to the sentient reincarnated plant. This has caused me to reconsider my bacon eating ways briefly. Luckily this passed as I chuckled then moved on - choosing not to apply much logic to clearly satirical piece attempting to offer new takes on well beaten tropes.
There are a few typos that even I can see (which is saying a lot) - open quotations are missing in some places along with comma usage being off. Other tense issues exist but are minor. Chapters fly by quickly enough that most problems can be overlooked. Be warned, some of the later chapters are clearly impacted by RRL's updates and look a bit more spaced out than normal.
As for characters, only a few are actively displayed in the currently released chapters. My feelings on this could go either way. I'm only invested in the main character as a source of amusement (like some sort of god watching television dramas to see what happens) but not on any personal level. If the show gets canceled I won't cry.
In short, if you're bored and want a mild giggle, read the first few chapters. By number three you should have