How do i get out of this world ?

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

Paimon0

• inferno
  Sep 10, 2024
• a surprise
  Sep 10, 2024
• Off to the capital
  Sep 10, 2024
• noble sign
  Sep 10, 2024
• Novice
  Sep 9, 2024
• an invite
  Sep 9, 2024
• the blackwoods
  Sep 9, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• MorossatiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Ok, this is an honest review. Just my thoughts. I don't have the truth of the universe so please don’t go for my neck.
  What I liked:
  1-I instantly liked the political and familial drama.
  2-The penwork was good.
  3-I found a few plot-twist here and there that I really liked.
  4-It made me laugh a couple times.
  What I didn't:
  1-The first battle goes from zero to DBZ levels in minutes with no build up. That felt jarring to say the list, but there is an easy fix; he just needs to put an earlier interlude where we see the antagonist fight one of his previous victims. But that is just a suggestion.
  2-The protagonist isn't coherent: he has the inner monologue of your average isekied Joe, is treated by his family as an incompetent fool and acts as an over-competent, ruthless killer. There should be hints of these traits on one another, otherwise it feels like the character is just what the plot requires of him at the moment. No bueno.
  3- The history feels aimless after a certain point, but most web-novels feel like that sooner or later so this isn't that bad really.
  Overall:
  Not a bad read. Needs a lil polish, but I enjoyed it.