How do i get out of this world ?

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2024

Author

Paimon0

• At Last, Terminus
  Oct 22, 2024
• bureaucracy
  Oct 17, 2024
• And he shall appers
  Sep 21, 2024
• beast raid
  Sep 18, 2024
• A side stop
  Sep 14, 2024
• Speak of the devil
  Sep 13, 2024
• On the way
  Sep 13, 2024
• escape
  Sep 12, 2024
• old fox
  Sep 12, 2024
• The black fox
  Sep 12, 2024
• old hall
  Sep 12, 2024
• klassikós
  Sep 12, 2024
• norelana
  Sep 11, 2024
• terrifed merchant
  Sep 11, 2024
• a lie
  Sep 11, 2024
• seryne
  Sep 11, 2024
• wonders
  Sep 10, 2024
• the Spirits
  Sep 10, 2024
• darkness
  Sep 10, 2024
• despair
  Sep 10, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• MorossatiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Ok, this is an honest review. Just my thoughts. I don't have the truth of the universe so please don’t go for my neck.
  What I liked:
  1-I instantly liked the political and familial drama.
  2-The penwork was good.
  3-I found a few plot-twist here and there that I really liked.
  4-It made me laugh a couple times.
  What I didn't:
  1-The first battle goes from zero to DBZ levels in minutes with no build up. That felt jarring to say the list, but there is an easy fix; he just needs to put an earlier interlude where we see the antagonist fight one of his previous victims. But that is just a suggestion.
  2-The protagonist isn't coherent: he has the inner monologue of your average isekied Joe, is treated by his family as an incompetent fool and acts as an over-competent, ruthless killer. There should be hints of these traits on one another, otherwise it feels like the character is just what the plot requires of him at the moment. No bueno.
  3- The history feels aimless after a certain point, but most web-novels feel like that sooner or later so this isn't that bad really.
  Overall:
  Not a bad read. Needs a lil polish, but I enjoyed it.