Hollywood art of sunnys

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2023

Author

vini modeus

• 62. heads of industry.
  Nov 5, 2023
• 61. premier.
  Nov 5, 2023
• 60. preparations.
  Oct 2, 2023
• 59. art academy
  Oct 2, 2023
• 58. A new company
  Oct 2, 2023
• 57. a different kind of goodbye.
  Oct 2, 2023
• 56. farewell
  Oct 2, 2023
• 55. rome.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 54. agent
  Sep 27, 2023
• 53. the great Italy.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 52. someday.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 51. las vegas.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 50. farewells.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 49. The world of animation.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 48. The dance
  Sep 27, 2023
• 47. capcom.
  Sep 27, 2023
• 46. struggle of wills.
  Sep 19, 2023
• 45. spring.
  Sep 19, 2023
• 44. pixar.
  Sep 19, 2023
• 43. Invest in a big way.
  Sep 19, 2023

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• CruxioRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  Like the title says.
  Its readable, the format is just annoying.
  Dont use >> too, RR allows indents you know.
  Dont use I when when its not the mc talking, its obviously the grandmother.
  Why her grandma? Did the mc suddenly turn into a girl? Confused at chapter 2, thats a first.
  Either you dont know spacing or thats a dialogue in a middle of a paragraph. Oh god use grammarly or something.
  Comments are blocked too, first time I've seen one in RR.
  I'll add more as I go.
  Still not fifty words? How about now?
  Nope, still a long way to go.
  The kid's words are kinda weird too, its a bit verbose
  Not worth reading.
  The story is bare bones
  MC is a cardboard. Side characters even more. Their interactions are rigid, almost emotionless. Only acts out for set routines.
  The mc's cheat is garbage, nothing is explained. The stat growth is neglible because it doesnt affect the mc at all. Basically a memory store to buy stories with a massive dose of wand waving.
  Its a shitty story that can only pull out big names.