Heaven and Hellfire 03: The Spirit of Wrath

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Description

Abdul Sahshir is a boy of contradictions.

He is more skilled with the sword than any other his age, and yet he goes everyone with his entire body hidden. Sahshir is a Prince of Western Kalthak, yet he must flee his domain for fear of his uncle.

Sahshir sets out to meet with his estranged father for anything but reconciliation. However, finds himself at the beginning of a dark journey. One that will lead him into the shadow of a dead god and a battlefield unlike any other...

Book three of Heaven and Hellfire.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: WilliamGabriel10

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 11
Views: 6,945

Chapters(26 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

inphernalmenaceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Abdul Sahshir is my favorite character in the story so far and he brings a unique and interesting perspective to the story which has up until now been lacking. Being on the opposite side of the conflict than the other protagonists gives us a window into the other side, humanizing them as well. Sahshir is unlike the others and holds a strong conviction that is rarely seen.
LleayaaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Really good and fun story. It was initially complicated but smoothed out quickly. I found it rather enjoyable to read and I’d recommend it to other readers who’re interested in military genres.
Style
The authors style is clear and only shows a few minor issues, none of which cause any major problems and they don’t impact the story that heavily. Sometimes it feels confusing to keep up with the characters but that could just be part of the early parts. I found some parts in the early chapters to be rather fast paced, but I assume it slows down overtime.
Story
The story is fun and keeps you interested even if the style can be odd at times. Some of the the problems I found are because of the quick-pacing but it isn’t too bad.
Grammar
There weren’t a lot of grammatical errors that cause issues for the story, not enough to hinder your immersion. There were some few missing commas and periods but they weren’t too bad. Overall the problems weren’t that bad and I think a little editing could easily fix them.
Character
This is (what I think is the best), the characters are great and have a solid amount of depth. The mc is written well and I’m all for anti-hero mcs and the author writes it really well.
Overall
Really good read even though it has a couple of issues. I really enjoyed it.
The Writer MeaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It's very complicated and some things in the story are hard to understand. It aims to introduce the characters by directly involving them in the story. I'm not sure if he succeeds in this. The universe of the story is undoubtedly the most potential part of the story, and some things that should be told over time rather than the gradual unfolding of the story are thrown in right away. Despite these, the story is worth reading and I think you should give it a chance, even if I couldn't figure out the connection with the previous stories. And I think the author should stop giving numbers as if it were a series if the stories are separate from each other. It will both reduce the readership and it will be difficult to read the story as a single story.