HEADPATTING IN MARVEL

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Description

Ryan is living a mundane, exhausting life when he suddenly transmigrated into a dangerous universe.

"Will I become a player? Or will I have a godlike system? "

Nope. He'll be starting with a trading system, where he will meet people like him from various universes.

Will he adapt to the new world? Will he shine or will he be in the shadow?

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Author: This is my first time writing. English is not my first language, but hey, I am learning.

warning: The protagonist in the story will split his soul into three, in which it will become a multiple leads story, each soul going into their own direction.

To understand why I make three protagonist, I will first share with you a Japanese saying. A man has 3 mask, the first face, you show to the world. The second face, you show to your close friends, and your family. The third face, you never show anyone.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
Alittlepiggy33

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYSLICE OF LIFESECRET IDENTITYMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATIONSUPER HEROESARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCETECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEERED

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
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14,138

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • krunrRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I find that usually for some super hero fan fictions that the main character goes over the top. This book
    is an amazing good read. Definitely will keep watch out for more chapters. Sadly I don't do long reviews so have to fluff up the word account so can post this review. Good job !
  • TrinalRogueRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I quite like this story, and has arguably one of the better uses of a trading system that I have read.
    I like that the slice of life aspect that comes with it is still there in the later chapters which can always be an issue that happens in superhero fanfictions, where it is initially tagged but eventually drops - though if it does come out of hiatus I'd hope that's kept in mind with the cannon shortly approaching.
    One criticism would be that
    It's not exactly THAT evident to the reader that Kai is a clone of Ryan after it is mentioned as they feel like different people especially in personality.
    But it is a small issue and from the last chapter it seems like it will just resolve itself
    Would love to see this eventually see the light of day again 👍
  • AfroDeebzRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Seems like it could be decent but it's written in a horribly disjointed, 3rd person present tense. It was more than enough to continuosly knock me out of my immersion into the story. Present tense is, in my opinion, one of the hardest ways to write a book, so I appreciate the try but it's just not working.