He has descended

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2021

Author

kingoftimepass

• The first unsupervised outing 2
  Nov 28, 2021
• The first unsupervised outing 1
  Nov 27, 2021
• The reality 6
  Nov 23, 2021
• The reality 5
  Nov 20, 2021
• The reality 4
  Nov 19, 2021
• The reality 3
  Nov 16, 2021
• The reality 2
  Nov 15, 2021
• The reality 1
  Nov 14, 2021
• The long deserved break
  Nov 13, 2021
• The mighty 'Tanka'
  Nov 12, 2021
• The second earth shaking event of the decade
  Nov 10, 2021
• The tread along the path 2
  Nov 8, 2021
• The tread along the path 1
  Nov 7, 2021
• The path forward
  Nov 6, 2021
• The catchphrase
  Oct 31, 2021
• The world 2
  Oct 30, 2021
• The world 1
  Oct 24, 2021
• The ‘Home’ before and after
  Oct 22, 2021
• The exile
  Oct 15, 2021
• The return and 'Kush'
  Oct 10, 2021

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Daoist_immoralRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I am going to keep my review short trying to stick to basics. I am sucker for mythology characters so you already had me on the hook there, i liked the way you introduce your characters and developing their backgrounds, which is a bit different from many. I liked that you are building up to something but the story is yet to start, but at some point you have to start, i would prefer if you started now than later, cause you have already taken up a lot of chapters. I get that you want him to struggle for his powers but at some point he is going to have to power up. Other than that, your word play is good and you could work on introducing the synopsis before putting in really high level terms in which people are going to keep on googling. I like that your characters are described well physically and the erotic part (:p) works for me as well The gore in your book is well described but you could go into more details there too especially when you are cutting them, that gives you a lot more opputunities Slow down on the profanities, especially from a 7 year old, though i don't mind Keep up the good work i guess