He has descended

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What happens when the one who trained all heroes, gets his wish at lastFollow as our protagonist given never before seen shortcomings fights through them to make something out of himself. He is helped by his companions he finds during his adventures, his parents and his teachers. He meets tragedies overcomes them and grows in the process, growing stronger step by step, one punch at a time

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: kingoftimepass

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Rating: 2.1/ 5.0
Followers: 17
Views: 17,251

Chapters(64 total)

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Daoist_immoralRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I am going to keep my review short trying to stick to basics. I am sucker for mythology characters so you already had me on the hook there, i liked the way you introduce your characters and developing their backgrounds, which is a bit different from many. I liked that you are building up to something but the story is yet to start, but at some point you have to start, i would prefer if you started now than later, cause you have already taken up a lot of chapters. I get that you want him to struggle for his powers but at some point he is going to have to power up. Other than that, your word play is good and you could work on introducing the synopsis before putting in really high level terms in which people are going to keep on googling. I like that your characters are described well physically and the erotic part (:p) works for me as well The gore in your book is well described but you could go into more details there too especially when you are cutting them, that gives you a lot more opputunities Slow down on the profanities, especially from a 7 year old, though i don't mind Keep up the good work i guess