He has descended
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Description
What happens when the one who trained all heroes, gets his wish at lastFollow as our protagonist given never before seen shortcomings fights through them to make something out of himself. He is helped by his companions he finds during his adventures, his parents and his teachers. He meets tragedies overcomes them and grows in the process, growing stronger step by step, one punch at a time
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- kingoftimepass
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 17
- Views
- 17,251
Chapters(64 total)
- Chapter 64: The Tears in the sand 14Nov 6, 2022
- Chapter 63: The Tears in the sand 13Oct 31, 2022
- Chapter 62: The Tears in the sand 12Oct 3, 2022
- Chapter 61: The Tears in the sand 11Sep 11, 2022
- Chapter 60: The Tears in the sand 10Sep 3, 2022
- Chapter 59: The Tears in the sand 9Aug 20, 2022
- Chapter 58: The Tears in the sand 8Aug 8, 2022
- Chapter 57: The Tears in the sand 7Jul 31, 2022
- Chapter 56: The Tears in the sand 6Jul 24, 2022
- Chapter 55: The Tears in sand 5May 31, 2022
- Chapter 54: The tears in the Sand 4May 8, 2022
- Chapter 53: The Tears in sand 3May 1, 2022
- Chapter 52: The Tears in sand 2Apr 24, 2022
- Chapter 51: The tears in sand 1Apr 17, 2022
- Chapter 50: The world 3Apr 13, 2022
- Chapter 49: The first unsupervised outing 6Apr 10, 2022
- Chapter 48: The first unsupervised outing 5Apr 3, 2022
- Chapter 47: The first unsupervised outing 4Mar 26, 2022
- Chapter 46: The Trouble in paradise 16Mar 16, 2022
- Chapter 45: The Trouble in Paradise 15Mar 3, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- Daoist_immoralRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am going to keep my review short trying to stick to basics. I am sucker for mythology characters so you already had me on the hook there, i liked the way you introduce your characters and developing their backgrounds, which is a bit different from many. I liked that you are building up to something but the story is yet to start, but at some point you have to start, i would prefer if you started now than later, cause you have already taken up a lot of chapters. I get that you want him to struggle for his powers but at some point he is going to have to power up. Other than that, your word play is good and you could work on introducing the synopsis before putting in really high level terms in which people are going to keep on googling. I like that your characters are described well physically and the erotic part (:p) works for me as well The gore in your book is well described but you could go into more details there too especially when you are cutting them, that gives you a lot more opputunities Slow down on the profanities, especially from a 7 year old, though i don't mind Keep up the good work i guess