Grey Wizard (Gamer fic)

Self-Published

Description

Pef Wizard is lost in Midway City, a place that doesn't exist and yet it's here.

But at Level 0, what can he do to survive?

Maybe learn Magic, or just level up a few times? Those alien sexy babes from outer space awaited a man like him.

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GigantoreRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Gamer skills and superheroes are just a great combo. I find the introduction to the story overall fantastic and I was truly excited to continue reading. Then the story after about the first 10 chapters stops progressing the character in any meaningful way, he just invents a new pill to cure sickness or disease, gains a level and every female is driven by lust for the MC. If the story continued in any meaningful way i must have missed it because the story focused 50-70% on sex and sprinkled in an alien invasion or city plague for the MC to fix with a gamer skill in a second or two.
OldawRoyal Road
★ 1.0
The MC is an emotionless machine that does everything with machine like precision. He does things for no reason and things that others just accept like it is normal. The writing feels like there is something missing and it feels like reading a raport. The whole story feels like watching a speedrun with perfect movements and no commentary while skipping all of the dialogs and cutscenes.