Grandma Online Adventures
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The year is 2133. The gaming industry has advanced by leaps and bounds, and VR games are now more popular than ever.
With the release of Elysium Online: Worlds of Arcadia, a new era has come to the world! Perfect reproduction of the senses, realistic AI, and freedom to do (almost) whatever you like.
Follow the adventures of Tacha Macha, a grandmother that waited forever to play a game like this.
However something strange is brewing under this beautiful game. What will the young Rye do, with his knowledge from the future to stop the extinction of humanity?
*A new chapter every wednesday!
*The gore tag is there as a failproof, don't mind it... (◕‿↼)
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Yellstar
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 32
- Views
- 25,897
Chapters(50 total)
- 09. Karma is always waiting, right behind the cornerNov 23, 2022
- 08. Forum BrowsingNov 16, 2022
- 07. Nightgleam Guardian RukkhNov 9, 2022
- 06. A Title is for LifeNov 2, 2022
- 05. Now Even Vegetables Run Around!Oct 26, 2022
- 04. Rowdy Morning at the InnOct 26, 2022
- 03. Hans the ScroogeOct 26, 2022
- 02. Lively Little VillageOct 26, 2022
- 01. Gaming GrandmaOct 26, 2022
- Prologue: Winds of Change and ParadiseOct 22, 2022
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- DBoyBluesRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I'll try to be more concise here.
The story is good so far. Old lady with a sense of humor in vr world. I do have two negatives, one the author needs suggestion on how to correct their grammar or spelling mistakes. Not a big deal and definitely not worth taking points off of a rating, let alone 2 of them. Secondly the constant pov change is annoying die to how we haven't even started the story properly and yet we have had 5 character views or so. I don't care about anybody but our main gal without a reason to, so in future chapters, please attempt to only do so occasionally. It breaks all momentum in the story and reader immersion to be suddenly swapped to another character for seemingly no reason.
I'm leaving a 5 star despite my negatives because I believe your story has great potential and could be a great story I revisit often. Leaving a bunch of negative reviews without constructive criticism for the author to improve on.. just kills their story and often their will to continue trying. Tell the author what you enjoy and what you don't, maybe explain why. That's how a story grows. Goodluck Yellstar. I hope your story grows into its potential.