Grand Saint Alloy
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Description
In an isolated part of the world Tristan had his life set. He was close enough to the top to be set for life but not so close that he would have to shoulder the responsibility his position comes with. That is, until he is betrayed by something no one can defend against. Their own blood.
With nothing more than a trace of the silver blooded demons flowing through his veins, Tristan is forced to the bottom of society. Those who accept him are outcasts, monsters, and those with no place left to go, but at least its something.
That is until Myths invade his home legends emerge from there dark cave and the world’s last sovereign threaten all he has left. Tristan, swears nothing more shall be taken and vows to protect what is his.
-Authors note
-Release schedule will be Monday, Wednesday, and Friday late afternoons.
-Grand Saint Alloy is only currently released on Royal Road and Patreon.
- Thanks for reading.
Information
- Status
- Ongoing
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Ajtype
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 336
- Views
- 554,155
Chapters(426 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- BayBay22Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5Pretty much what the review title says, I feel like this story just deserved more reviews then it currrently does.
So yeah, word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count word count - Dragon Lord IdunnRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This story is relatively good. I appreciate that not everyone unrelated to the mc is out to get him. It starts small, but looks as if it is going to unfold nicely. Also Luke, he is one of the best things here.
Style- I love stories that don’t take themselves to seriously. It mixes serious stakes with chapter headings like Apocalyptic Chicken. The main villain has shown up so far, but there are enough problems caused by bad circumstances and human selfishness
Story score- It does nothing new, but then again no one does. Several times i thought It was becoming predictable only for some character like Luke or Olfred to drive it wildly off the expected rout. Thankfully it does have a fresh take on things like magic cores (kern- German for heart, yes it’s important), elementals (spawned from human suffering), and responsibility to one’s own family.
Grammar- this one is where the largest failing is, however just like any failure it can be turned around. ajtype is receptive to grammar critiques and fixes them within a day or two of them being pointed out, most of the time I got thanked for it.
Character Score- fairly consistent, however, most side characters are one tone. Olfred is always a jerk, Luke is always casual. Which is fine for a web novel. The mc does go through personal growth, and also is influenced by the people around him. He becomes both better person around better people and suffers degradation from worse people. - BaqknsRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0When I started reading the story, I didn't knew what to expect from the story. Especially, what Grand Saint Alloy meant. And now that I learnt of the foreboding, I expect great things from the characters and the author.
Characters: The strongest part of the story are the characters who can range from goofy to serious, caring to strict and have hidden agendas.
Story: The setting of the land is pretty good and the magic system is ingrained deep in the society. The expanse and depth of the story definitely indicates bigger adventures and lots of characters.
Style: The story has been given much thought and planned before execution. But in some cases, I think the portrayal of the emotions could have been better. Like the betrayal from a beloved had a potential emotion left untapped.
Grammar: A lot of work has to be put into the grammar to enable a reader to smoothly read through the chapters. Often punctuations are off the mark making it difficult to find out whose speaking what. A poor grammar can cause much damage to the story and the characters and I am confident that a bit of proofreading and editing can make this story shine. - Doomed BobbyRoyal Road★★★ 3.0It's not bad, but it's not good either. There is no one big thing that made me stop reading its a bunch of smaller things that add up. The reasoning behind stuff isn't great. Everyone in a place of power or authority is so over done on cringe factor and alot of little things made me drop the story