Gluttonous little crow
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Aion Corvidae was born a three eyed gray crow, a bird thought to be the weakest creature in the world, but through a mysterious accident Aion was able to obtain a new body and family. Now what he desires most is strength, enough strength to return to the family that abandoned him for his lack of stength.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Devowering crow
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 246
- Views
- 104,267
Chapters(25 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- YuriDhjeeynRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0please, PLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEE continue writing.
I love your story and i especially love Aion.
Well about the grammar, it may not be perfect, but I think it is more than good enough. - agu12hRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0makes Aion a knight assassin with combined two kinds clothing and iris as a couple, plsssssss >;3
Very cool history :D - PelimaniaRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The Grammar is pretty terrible, but reading up to chapter 3 the origin of the character seems vaguely interesting. I look forward to seeing where it goes and if its good.
- starfyre7Royal Road★★★ 3.0From the parts I read, the story is interesting. However, the grammar is quite bad and, from what I have seen, the editing gets worse. In chapters 2 and 3, I noticed a lot of missing capitalization, both of names and at the beginnings of sentences.
There are lots of run-on sentences I have noticed as well.
Since the premise and the idea so far is very interesting, I'd love to revisit this story after it has been edited. But right now, it is too hard to read.