Getting a Common Game Ability on Normal Life [Revised]
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Description
This was based on my other story, since i made a mistake somewhere in the middle and the story kinda became generic.
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Suddenly, without explanation, a transparent screen appeared in front of random people around the world.
They were bestowed with cool abilities like, [Fireball], [Heal], or [Summoning]. Some used it for the greater good, others for their own benefit. However, some had meh ability
Like my sis, she had [Daily Spin] that allowed her to get a random gift every-day
I knew another guy that had [Spicy Breath] spewing fire from his mouth whenever he ate something spicy
As for me! i had [Mini-map] as my ability! like what the hell! seriously!? Now I’m stuck with a box on the top right that blocks 1/16 of my vision…
Right, i didn't forget to mention about monster right?
I do not own the image, I put random images from the internet and photoshopped it
And feel free to criticize me, at least point out where I make the mistake ^^
Danetello helped me making the description!
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If you have interesting idea about common tropes in video game feel free to join in ^^
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- KidyZ
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 71
- Views
- 31,189
Chapters(21 total)
- 1.17 PvPAug 7, 2018
- 1.16 Noob (Part 2)Aug 7, 2018
- 1.16 NoobAug 7, 2018
- 1.15 Rain Is FallingAug 6, 2018
- 1.14 The Night Before The StormAug 5, 2018
- 1.13 Training (Part 2)Aug 5, 2018
- 1.13 TrainingAug 5, 2018
- 1.12 Game Boosting (part 2)Aug 4, 2018
- 1.12 Game Boosting (part 1)Aug 4, 2018
- 1.11 GrindingAug 4, 2018
- 1.10 Persuasion Mini GameAug 3, 2018
- 1.9 Someone Is TriggeredAug 2, 2018
- 1.8 When a Pet Is Flushed Down At The ToiletAug 2, 2018
- 1.7 Obligatory DungeonAug 1, 2018
- 1.6 When The MC Come To The Guild, You Know The Rest of StoryAug 1, 2018
- 1.5 Always A YoungsterJul 31, 2018
- 1.4 You Can't Say No In RPGJul 31, 2018
- 1.3 Random EncounterJul 28, 2018
- 1.2 Hide & SeekJul 28, 2018
- 1.1 Nothing specialJul 28, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- gameinator1Royal Road★★★ 3.0from someone who read the first one the writing style is much better, but it is jarring to see the changes to the story, but if looked at as a new story i see lots of potential, in closeing im following to see how good it can get, good luck and good writing.
- SanchoMontoyaRoyal Road★ 0.5Okay idea, poor execution. Grammar is bad. Cliche' setting the MC as Japanese, but literally nothing else to indicate setting other than generic high school. Stupid behavior on the part of supposed adults. Nonsensical deus ex machina appearances of opponents and monsters. Oh, and Batman's origin story with no explanation of how/why this kid and his siblings are living alone, so bad Disney plotting, too, because at least Batman had Alfred.