Getting a Common Game Ability on Normal Life [Revised]

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Description

This was based on my other story, since i made a mistake somewhere in the middle and the story kinda became generic.

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Suddenly, without explanation, a transparent screen appeared in front of random people around the world.

They were bestowed with cool abilities like, [Fireball], [Heal], or [Summoning]. Some used it for the greater good, others for their own benefit. However, some had meh ability

Like my sis, she had [Daily Spin] that allowed her to get a random gift every-day

I knew another guy that had [Spicy Breath] spewing fire from his mouth whenever he ate something spicy

As for me! i had [Mini-map] as my ability! like what the hell! seriously!? Now I’m stuck with a box on the top right that blocks 1/16 of my vision…

Right, i didn't forget to mention about monster right?

I do not own the image, I put random images from the internet and photoshopped it

And feel free to criticize me, at least point out where I make the mistake ^^

Danetello helped me making the description!

Follow my patreon at

https://www.patreon.com/KidyZ

Also i have a discord channel

https://discord.gg/KYC8yM

If you have interesting idea about common tropes in video game feel free to join in ^^

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
KidyZ

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.8/ 5.0
Followers
71
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31,189

Chapters(21 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • gameinator1Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    from someone who read the first one the writing style is much better, but it is jarring to see the changes to the story,  but if looked at as a new story i see lots of potential, in closeing im following to see how good it can get, good luck and good writing.
  • SanchoMontoyaRoyal Road
    0.5
    Okay idea, poor execution. Grammar is bad. Cliche' setting the MC as Japanese, but literally nothing else to indicate setting other than generic high school. Stupid behavior on the part of supposed adults. Nonsensical deus ex machina appearances of opponents and monsters. Oh, and Batman's origin story with no explanation of how/why this kid and his siblings are living alone, so bad Disney plotting, too, because at least Batman had Alfred.