Gallanor (On hiatus)
Self-Published
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Description
In the year 2036 the theory of ejection was proposed. Ejection is the process of transferring a persons entire being from one universe to the next closest one. Once done this theoretical process cannot be reverted. Darren Tower the first person to ever eject finds himself in Gallanor a inhabitable world in the Universe adjacent to his own. Unaware that his arrival will set in motion a chain of events that will shake this world and his own to their cores.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- mallettjt
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 165
- Views
- 103,630
Chapters(42 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- KandoralRoyal Road★★ 2.0Like the title states, English seems to be a hard language. There are so many mistakes inside the chapters that the eyes will start to bleed. Maybe it is a good story, maybe not, can't tell because of all the mistakes (srsly what do you want to say in your chapters? The mistakes make the story unreadable)
Style: Short chapters (or so it feels, maybe because of the mistakes). Not much happening in them, POV changes without indication (not a big problem)
Story: look at the first paragraph
Grammar: Title says it all
Character: The characters seem a bit shallow. Because of the prologue our MC is not really introduced - NeoMareRoyal Road★ 0.5While I am not a grammar nazi, there are some unforgivable mistakes and this story is full of them. Short chapters with little cohesion and flooding mistakes.