Gaia : Legend of Merlin (Stopped)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2020

Author

Will Phatsie

• Volume 2, Chapter 6 - Evaluation 3 (The Trio's turn)
  Dec 6, 2020
• Volume 2, Chapter 5 - Evaluation 2
  Dec 5, 2020
• Volume 2, Chapter 4 - Evaluation 1
  Dec 4, 2020
• Volume 2, Chapter 3 - Day of the Test
  Dec 3, 2020
• Volume 2, Chapter 2 - Preparation of the Test
  Dec 2, 2020
• Volume 2 , Chapter 1 - Family Reunion
  Dec 1, 2020
• Volume 1 - Early Life
  Dec 1, 2020

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• luda305Royal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  The story is like slice of life, but very fast if that makes sense.  Like, rather than having a time skip, it's more like skimming over all the time quickly. It has some strong shonen influences, like calling out attack names.
  The characters are pretty flat and all seem to have the same voice.
  The grammar is fine, but the style is pretty clunky.  Many paragraphs run too long.  And including dialogue from more than one person in the same paragraph. And a fair number of sentences are just awkwardly written or stilted.  There are also "stage directions" or mid-chapter author's notes included sometimes which is weird to read. And some very strange word choices that don't make sense in context.