Future Combat Mecha

Self-Published

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Description

（I am the author of this novel, a non-English speaking writer. This novel has been translated through GPT4.0. If this is an issue, I apologize.）

Announcement: The main storyline of this novel will undergo a significant adjustment, which is expected to take approximately 3 days to complete. After the adjustment, some parts of the first 25 chapters will also be modified. I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause during your reading experience and kindly ask for your understanding!——2023.08.12

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: [email protected]

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Rating: 2.8/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 6,646

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Community Reviews(2)

burningGroundRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The depictation of the mechas is very cool. I enjoyed them (being a Gundam fan). I also enjoyed the beginning phase when the author introduced us to the "mystery figure", I'm intrigued to see how relevant they'll be in the grand scheme of thing.
However, the transition of scene between the "mysterious figure" (who I assume to be the protagonist) and "Admiral Lin White" does not have the best flow, it felt jarring.
The introduction of the character 'Lin White' has some very... weird depictations like this passage
[...]His facial features are distinct, his facial features are correct[...]
Doesn't the above segment sound like a machine translation to you?
There are other instances of paragraphs where the flow and style can be improved such as:
Lin White opened the secret communication screen inside and said to the figure on the other side of the screen, "The signal of Explorer One has been lost."
That passage is supposed to depict a drastic turnabout, so adding in more tension would increase the impact. Instead, the prose is flat, rendering these supposedly high stakes developments lamer than what they could have been.
leodehngreycurseRoyal Road
★ 0.5
From just reading the synopsis alone, one can tell this whole story has been generated by chatgpt, probably the free version. This is most evident from the repeated sentences, the lack of emotion and the way descriptions and scenes just fall flat.
Most likely the author (if they can be called that) wanted to make their own Gundam fanfic yet lacked either the patience or skill to pull it off, thus they resorted to promt the AI with their ideas and tried to pass it as their own work.
Now, I know that royalroad does not forbid AI gerenated writing, but it at least must be tagged as such, which this fiction does not.