Frozen Ember

Self-Published

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Description

When Leon is diagnosed with terminal brain cancer, he goes into cryogenic sleep to wait for a suitable treatment to be discovered. What he didn’t expect, however, was to wake up more than 130 years later to a changed world.

Gone are diplomatic governments and independent countries. Now, mega-corporations and social status determine your worth in this new order.

And Leon clearly got the short end of the stick.

His disease might be cured, but now there is a whole new type of cancer invading his life. The only difference is that there might not be another way than to face it head-on.

……….

Update Schedule: 3 chapters/week

This story is also published on ScribbleHub.

What to expect:

- Sci-Fi Setting with Inventor/Genius MC

- Plot-focused Story with fleshed out Characters

- Single Female Lead and Romantic Subplot

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: LukeBarnes

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 27
Views: 9,118

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Community Reviews(2)

aka_MAXRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
character-driven storytelling, science fiction, and the intricacies of young adult drama, this narrative invites you into a captivating experience. The main character is a delightful amalgamation of confidence and endearing awkwardness, perfectly encapsulating the charming complexities of an introvert. His journey, while currently lacking in overt conflict, hints at the thrilling tensions that may soon unfold, igniting curiosity about his potential growth. The supporting cast is equally compelling, each character vividly drawn with their own unique arcs and relationships that breathe life into the story. Their experiences add layers of depth, infusing the narrative with a genuine sense of teen drama that resonates with authenticity and relatability. The world-building is particularly noteworthy, enveloping readers in a richly detailed landscape that balances immersive descriptions with intriguing ambiguity. This anti-utopian vision diverges from the usual dystopian tropes, presenting a thought-provoking backdrop that invites reflection and speculation. The writing showcases a deft craftsmanship, with a robust structure and dialogue that flows with a natural rhythm, drawing readers further into the story. Though there are a few scattered typos, their rarity does little to diminish the overall enjoyment of this compelling read. With its promise of success lingering on the horizon, this story is a journey not to be missed, leaving you eager for more.
MonkQuangRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Binged what’s out in a day or two and was left needing more.
If you like character-driven stories, sci-fi, and teen (okay, young adult, let’s be fair) drama, then stop wasting time reading this review and dive into the story.
For those who are on the fence and still need a little push, let me be brief without spoiling too much:
The MC hits the sweet spot between being a super-capable, overconfident genius and an adorable dork, encapsulating the essence of a slightly awkward introvert pretty well. He’s direct and eccentric in a funny way, without coming across as over the top. I just wish there was a bit more pushback for him, but who knows, maybe it's just around the corner.
The supporting cast is distinct and likable, feeling like real people with their own lives, ambitions, and problems - not just cardboard cutouts for the MC to interact with. They have relationships with each other - some more complicated than others - and there’s just this distinct teen drama tension at times that really sells it for me.
The world, to me, is compelling, with just enough worldbuilding to give a general idea of it while leaving room for questions and speculation, making chapters go by in a blink. I really like the kind of anti-utopia the author is creating. Perhaps it’s minor, but to me, it really stands out in the plentiful fields of dystopian visions so common on this site.
And to top it all off, it’s simply well written. The paragraphs are well-structured, the dialogue flows well. I was a bit afraid of the multiple story threads being juggled at once, but they’re all handled with the care they deserve, so nothing feels like an afterthought. The occasional typos, while present, are few and far between. An easy, pleasurable read all around.
I can easily see this story gaining popularity very soon, and I’m very much rooting for its success.