Founders of The New Age

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Description

When Arthur found himself in the middle of nowhere, he knew nothing about where his destiny would take him on this strange world. But after his first night, he was sure that there were many monsters on his road.

This is the story of arthur,

The story of building his home,

and the story of how he changed the world.

Enjoy!

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English is my second language, so there will be a lot of spelling mistakes. If you are bothered by grammatical errors, I would not recommend you to read it for now. I plan to rewrite . I think you can try again when I correct it, thank you for your understanding.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Mybro

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 36
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Community Reviews(3)

Enjoyer_Of_BooksRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I like slice of life novels with magic and litrpg mechanics. This one is more gamelit like where there are levels, classes, and skills but there are not full status pages of statistics shown.
15 chapters in so far and the novel is mostly a light hearted slice of life of a guy from earth transported to a new world where he joins an adventuring party, learns magic, and introduces the locals to coffee.
Not a heavy focus on the mc learning how to fight and do magic to kill things, though there have been a few fights.
As of this review we have not got to the city building that is likely to happen in future chapters.
GoldeNeedleRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This will be a small review.
Going directly to the heart of the matter, I really like it, the characters have a nice alchemy together, and I am eager to learn more about the world and them. I read all 25 chapters as of the time of writing this review.
My only problem with your story are the numerous mistakes. Sometimes you forget uppercases at the beginning of sentences, sometimes when naming characters. Also, you seem to be switching pronouns every time for characters whose gender have already been established. Individually, these are no big mistakes. The problem is, they pile up. It's such a shame, because the idea behind the story is really nice, well, at least, I really like those stories.
I can only hope that you will get better at avoiding these mistakes as you progress as a writer. I'm hopeful you will! Keep going!
Kimberly HazelwoodRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I really am enjoying this story and was sad when I hit the last chapter and now have to wait. I have no patience and tend to read books with a lot of chapters already done. I love slice of life novels and this is a good one with just enough action to keep it from getting too slow. I gave it 4 stars just because it gets confusing very easy, there are a lot of gender pronoun mess ups so it pops you out of the story quite often. I usually overlook typos and misspellings when people are working on their books, this just happens alot. BUT don't make that keep you from reading this, it is still a good story.