Forsaken Haven

Self-Published

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Description

After years of yearning, Ain awakens his innate talent during the Spirit Awakening Ceremony. Moreover, amidst his celebration, his innate talent mysteriously mutates!

Follow Ain’s fascinating journey alongside his spirit pets as they delve into the captivating world of spirit tamers, where they’ll encounter fierce spirit beasts, discover extraordinary resources, obtain wondrous skills and spells, and uncover the world’s profound secrets. Will Ain reign supreme over all realms and be crowned Sovereign? You have the chance to find out!

Forsaken Haven has been discontinued and rebooted as Epoch of the Wisdom King. Please read latest announcement for more information.

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2023
Author: Limitless Sky

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 104
Views: 96,644

Chapters(104 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

BrownDynamiteRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is well written and feels like it progresses at a good pace. I like that there are already periods of action and periods of downtime during which the main character can consolidate his growth and pursue activities other than training. The grammar so far has been excellent and I have not noticed any instances of repetitive word usage.
I am a sucker for the beast tamer trope and I really appreciate the author’s consistent upload schedule so far. I am certain that I will continue to follow this story and eagerly await the next chapters!
T.A.L DeasonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style - Honestly I thought this story wouldn’t keep my interest. I do need to say this was part of a review swap. The story is familiar enough, an orphan awakens big powers and then gets to advance as quickly as possible and be the best. The author however did a great job of getting me invested in the MC Ain’s journey. By chapter 10 I was fully invested. A good mix of fantasy with magic in a futuristic setting. Hints of Harry Potter and MHA.
story- the story is really good, it’s not packed with action but hints at action to come later on. Ain is a loner, an orphan that unlocks a potentially strong power and stats training at the academy to progress his abilities. He gains the eye of his I try for Teacher Turner and gains a friend in Hugo along the way.
grammar- the grammar is really good. I’m no expert but I saw nothing that would make me give it less than five stars.
characters- I like the characters. Ain is a loner and I’m hoping his personality blossoms as the story progresses but you get a good feel for him. He is driven and only sees one path to bettering his place in the world and that goal is paramount to everything including relationships. The characters are well written and I’m sure the author will flesh them out more as the story progresses.
Weas97Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far it has been a good novel in every way I can judge (I'm not good at grammar nor is English my language but it looks good to me), the main character is pleasant and consistent and seems to have good morals without being extremist ( He is not a saint nor a crazy murderer) and he thinks things through before doing them, he reacts to his age and it is nice to see him learning, he has a great skill but not directly OP, rather one that helps him learn faster and find his way The rhythm is good, neither fast nor slow, it feels natural and I have not felt any interruption or overlooked topic until now and I love the magical pet system, although it is not the most innovative, it was executed very well and I love the part in which the master is not only a stick that gives orders but also fights with his pet and helps him in addition to having his own growth which complements very well compared to others.
In summary, it is a well-made novel with a very pleasant reading flow (I read all the chapters in a row without getting tired and always waiting for more) and I think it should be given a chance, ENJOY IT.
choc51Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This is my first review on RR so it might not be the best.
Overall, I really like the beginning of this story. It sets a good foundation for the rest. Ok, the mc may or may not have received a form of OP ability but it is more of a support one to his growth which is so far well balanced.
Can't wait for further chapters!!
Iceheart D. ZeroRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As the title says its a very good novel. The grammar is good, the plot is interesting, and the story itself is engaging. That said it still has its shortcomings.
Contains spoilers below this point. You have been warned.
Shortcoming 1: the MC is kinda blasé about everything. While he doesn't accept everything at face value he is not really digging into anything either. For example he assumes there isn't any type of medicine that can increase the quality of his spirit energy, but it turned out he just didn't look hard enough for it. As after he was presented with some he found it on the net after a few minutes.
Shortcoming 2: His emotions rarely if ever manifest. So far I saw four scenes where he really showed his emotions. When he nearly died, when his mentor left the city, when first reading his mentors gift and when he found those pups. Any other time it seems like he is extremely calm and collected. This isn't wrong per se, it just bothers me that he shows so little emotions.
Because of these two points I only gave it four stars.
TargetDroneRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
So, i have mixed feelings about this story. I find the setting intriguing, the cultivation/magic system shows that the author put some thought into it, and of course i am a sucker for taming/pet stories, bonus points for sporting a cat amongst others.
But for me, there is one glaring flaw, and that is the MC. While not immediately noticable at the beginning, the MC lacks any kind of character development. He is a the xanxia MC stereotype personified. the futher this goes, the more robotic he becomes.
Also, there are no setbacks or dificulties to overcome, every problem he tackles he solves easily. And aside from some token interactions, he has no social development as well, making the interactions whith side characters rather bland. I had to subtract 2 Stars for those issues.