Flavor of the Month: Death and Dropouts
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Description
On a moon orbiting a gas giant, in turn orbiting a star in turn orbiting another, a god stirs in the memory of an elephant.Cornsilk, greatest and humblest of all wizard...was dead. A murder most foul? Probably not, he was very old and out of shape. But something is off, his once grand tower is now an old windmill, brooms are starting to fly, and the baker's oven is a portal to hell.Investigating is Mace Perovay, bitter college dropout and passable wizard. Helping her is Thistle Nightwaren, a widow and empty nester with a desire to be a hero while she's still young.In a world of magic, mammoths, and motherhood, the strangest thing is a mystery that has seemingly already been solved.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- NoahR
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 37
- Views
- 11,203
Chapters(34 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Silverstorm4444Royal Road★★★★ 4.0Pretty solid story. Definite highlight is the art and the creativity that goes into world building. One thing is that it is very dialogue heavy, but even then the dialogue feels natural and not forced. I personally would like more description of the world around them--especially the creatures they come across. The art of them is beautiful, and I feel like some more written description of them would go a long way.
- TensaProductionsRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5This is really funny, and if I'm being real it was very easy to read and understand. Keep going, and keep making improvements. This will go a long way with enough work. Your vocabulary, and punctuation is something that can be fixed with just a little time. Keep writing, and you have received a follow because i'm actually interested.