Fiction Life Support System
Self-Published
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Description
Fiction Life Support System is my history in the fictional works of my reality and my growth in there. My name is Kyx Kantyrox and this is my account of my adventures in the fictional works I consume. With my personal system, which I've named the Fictional Life Support System, I become the main character in fictional works.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
Tags
LITRPGACTIONFANTASYVIRTUAL REALITYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADSCI-FISUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSSCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADGAMELITGENDER BENDERMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYSPORTSMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSNON-HUMAN LEADREADER INTERACTIVEPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIPOST APOCALYPTICLOW FANTASYKINGDOM BUILDINGREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEADCYBERPUNKGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDMYTHOSSOFT SCI-FISTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYCULTIVATIONSPACE OPERAPROGRESSIONWUXIADYSTOPIATIME TRAVELTIME LOOPSUPER HEROESARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCETECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDFIRST CONTACTATTRACTIVE LEADSTEAMPUNKHARD SCI-FIDUNGEON CORE
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 165
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Ian JagerRoyal Road★★★ 2.5I can't say I didn't fall into the SI pitfall back when I started writing a few years ago, but I'm thankful I didn't fall this deep.
The entire premise is that the author -ahem excuse me- the "main character" has a system at his possession that allows him to insert himself into the main character's role in every fiction he 'consumes' (why doesn't he just say 'read'?). I can imagine all sorts of ways this could go downhill, but hope the author goes for a witty, light-hearted plot instead of some cheesy harem script that twists the target fictions' characters into confusing 'variants'.
Quick Rating for Advanced, because every fiction needs an advanced review (especially new authors who are at risk of having their self esteem smashed by a 0.5 storm)
Grammar: 5/5, as expected of any aspiring author
Style: 3/5, disappointing. I can't say much more considering chapter 1's length, except that very little thought came into giving any life to the scene. The author obviously imagines a lot of good and interesting details, but must've failed to bring them into life. Therefore, we are provided with an empty canvas spanning a few paragraphs and expected to fill in the details ourselves.
Characters: 2/5:
Painful to read. The two side-kicks aren't even worth the title 'cardboard cutouts', since their introduction is as short as two sentences and boils down to "Hi, my name is [x]". As for the main character...it's a C or D-tier SI, what do you expect? There's hardly any shock or negative emotion, but not any positive emotions either. Just a bland-faced first person point-of-view "OK, this is cool, let's get to it."
Story: 3/5:
A quantum-locked dumpster fire waiting for the author to nudge it to ignition. Hopefully that will never happen and we will see the execution of a moderately enjoyable fiction, but my hopes are low.
PS: At least the author had the courage to post what is obviously his first fiction and receive public, unfiltered criticism. Can't say the same for a lot, includ