Extra's Return with SSS Plunder System [Progression Fantasy | Regression]

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Theo's story came to an end when the cold blade of a heretic's sword pierced through his heart. And yet, as if to slap his face after years of using endless efforts to compensate for his lacking potential...

His talent awoke right at the moment he was about to metaphysically move on?!***

[SSS Rank Talent Unlocked!][Activate: Plunder][Plundered: One-Time Reversal]

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What was supposed to be Theo's segway to his final rest became a wake-up call.

'Wait, this world...'

With the drill sergeant of the knight's bootcamp screaming obscenities at the cadets, Theo's mind raced as his body prepared to dash ahead.

'Isn't this a world of a novel I used to read every chance I've got?' he thought as his consciousness, rather than finding out whether the afterlife was real, was thrust right back to when he was at his weakest and most vulnerable.

'And aren't I... just a talentless extra? One that didn't even make it to the story's climax?!'

The drill sergeant raised his hand, ready to give everyone the mark to begin their life-changing exam.

'Then...' he gulped his saliva down 'just where the hell did that SSS-Rank talent come from?!'

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: Mike Kebrow

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Rating: 2.6/ 5.0
Followers: 26
Views: 11,554

Chapters(28 total)

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NeuralNarrativeRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The writing feels all over the place, making it hard to follow what's going on. The plot is confusing and lacks a clear direction, which makes it difficult to connect with the story or enjoy it. The events don't flow naturally, and it feels like the author is just throwing ideas together without a solid plan. The lack of structure and clarity makes the story frustrating to read.
On top of that, there are way too many words used to explain things that could be said in just a few sentences. It feels like the author is stretching everything out to increase the word count, which makes the story drag and become tiring. Instead of being engaging, the story becomes a chore to read because of all the unnecessary details and overly long explanations.
The pacing is also off. Important moments are rushed, while unimportant scenes are dragged out for far too long. This makes it hard to stay invested in the characters or their struggles. The dialogue often feels unnatural, as if the characters are just there to explain things to the reader rather than having real conversations.