Experimental Wuxia Novel

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

kgy121

• On a Boat 4
  May 30, 2022
• On a Boat 3
  Dec 9, 2020
• On a Boat 2
  Dec 6, 2020
• On a Boat 1
  Dec 4, 2020
• Dock Fight Aftermath
  Dec 2, 2020
• Through the Docks
  Dec 1, 2020
• Back in Town, For the Moment
  Nov 30, 2020
• Dock Fight
  Nov 25, 2020
• Liquor Shop
  Nov 20, 2020
• The Third Perspective
  Nov 16, 2020
• Docks 8
  Nov 16, 2020
• Docks 7
  Nov 15, 2020
• Docks 6
  Nov 14, 2020
• Not the Docks
  Nov 13, 2020
• Dock 5
  Nov 13, 2020
• Docks 4
  Nov 11, 2020
• Docks 3
  Nov 11, 2020
• Docks 2
  Nov 10, 2020
• Docks 1
  Nov 9, 2020
• Port Town 9
  Nov 9, 2020

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• Luke ScheffeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Ok, this is an interesting story. It is still very much in its formative stages where I am, and I confess to pushing this review out early due to the completion going on. I am unclear on why the Author promoted the story on the April thread given the 16-month hiatus, but I am glad they did, as I've enjoyed it. Poke poke author, time for more chapters if you are going to promote this. Overall - 10/10
  Style - style is good. I've been enjoying this book so far, but things are rather confusing, on how the whole magic thing is supposed to work. Style - 9/10
  Story -  Not sure where it's going, but I'm not sure if the author knows either. It seems like a lot of the story was just made up on the spot. Story - 10/10
  Grammar - Move along, nothing to see here. I don't pay attention to them, so I only barely notice them. Grammar 10/10
  Characters - Also rather confusing and a bit flat at this point in the story, but that's the inevitability of only being 6 chapters in. I am looking forward to the adventures of the farmgirl and Hivebeing, but I'm not so sure about the demonic cultivator. Characters - 8/10
• Sage Drunk KittyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  An interesting story about an alien and a girl with a pokey stick. Quality is good, word flow is nice, the occasional typo every chapter or two. Just poke the author in the comments to get them to fix it. Poking the author for replies and more chapters also works. Tested and proven by me! So come join me in poking the author!
• luda305Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The first 30 chapters are exceptionally strong. An inhuman immortal falls from the heavens and is stumbled across by a peasant girl. He lacks context to understand such simple things as gravity or getting tired. She's desperate for an edge to start her cultivation on the right foot.
  After that, seems tend to go extremely chaotic. I've completely lost the thread of what the hell is happening with the protagonists. On top of that, the kitchen sink appears with such things as Isekai protagonists with systems, strange fourth wall breakage, and other things. It's a huge shift (tonally and otherwise) and I'm perplexed.