Evolution: Online [LitRPG]

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When the main character Ray Smith becomes a shut in, all he does is spend his time playing the ever popular Evolution: Online, an MMORPG game that focuses on the monsters perspective with the aim being to level up from a weak monster and evolve into stronger monsters. However, after accepting a challenge from a strange player, he finds himself in a strange location and in a complete new body. he had been transported? reincarnated? he did not know, all he knew is that he was in the world of Evoden, which is the world his favorite MMORPG game, Evolution: Online is set in and had become a skeleton. His goal, is to evolve into a superior human and defeat the demon Lord, however he quickly learns that this world is very real and is not exactly what he thought it would be, as he learns about the dark acts The humans are committing against Demi-humans in this new world of Evoden, is this really the same world his favorite game was set in? could this be related to the demon lord? or was it something new entirely? no matter, he will help the Demi-humans and defeat the Demon lord, even if he has to cast aside his humanity and war against them with his new found allies he meets along the way

in this fantasy journal full of battles, evolving, mystical creatures and harsh realities, can Ray achieve both of his goals of ridding this world of tyranny as well as defeat the Demon lord? There’s only one way to find out.

This whole story is made by me and me alone, art, synopsis, plot and each and every chapter. I upload daily between 5pm-8pm GMT. Follow and favourite for constant updates🙏🏾

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2024
Author: CBwrites

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 58
Views: 25,209

Chapters(59 total)

What readers say about Evolution: Online [LitRPG]

“the story is a very unique story, i like how its an isekai story set in a game world where things aren't exactly the same as the game and the main character slowly learns about the differences and is confused as to what happened, for example when he first k…”
dragonboy8Royal Road5.0 / 5
“the story's premise is very interesting and has some potential, it is a bit rough around the edges but for a first story of a 17 year old who created it alone. from the synopsis i can tell that the story has an interesting and unique premise that also holds…”
rando2356Royal Road5.0 / 5

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Community Reviews(7)

dragonboy8Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
the story is a very unique story, i like how its an isekai story set in a game world where things aren't exactly the same as the game and the main character slowly learns about the differences and is confused as to what happened, for example when he first kills a goblin he is shocked that it bled and it made him realize that this isn't just some game it is his reality
SPOILER - the humans are trash scum, but i wonder if something happened that turned them like this??
i also love how the author doesn't force feed you information and explains them bit by bit as the story goes on so you feel like the world is growing and expanding before you
the power system is explained really well. i like how every one has mana and it either shows itself in skills or magic and Rays new power of the Phoenix is very cool and unique and the way it is used is once again explained really well, informing us on how he struggled with one aspect of the power but found the other half easier tells us more about him as a character, i can't wait to see what cool things he does with it.
i also wonder if there's any other powers out there that we don't know of yet.
The main character is also very cool, i don't like wimpy main characters personally so the fact that Ray is a bad ass is really cool, he literally dived right into a nest of goblins and solo's them, he has the potential to be insanely OP and i can't wait to read more and more battles and see him grow.
the other characters are really cool and well written aswell
we have Ken, who is basically a prodigy goblin who lacks any form of attachment to his own kind because they are lazy and didn't strive for improvements. he makes a sick duotagonist and his relationship with Ray is just perfect as Ken is like the straight man and Ray can be goofy sometimes, one of my favorite interactions is when Ray asks Ken if he wants him to read to him because Ken can't read human LOL
Lilly, although only just meeting her, you can tell she's motivated and thin
rando2356Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
the story's premise is very interesting and has some potential, it is a bit rough around the edges but for a first story of a 17 year old who created it alone.
from the synopsis i can tell that the story has an interesting and unique premise that also holds dear to alot of usual tropes typically seen in these types of stories. if he can draw out the potential of this story i think it could become a great web novel and would make for a good manga or webtoon so we can see the events in pictures, THERES A LOT OF THINGS IM CURIOUS ABOUT TOO SO I HOPE MY CURIOSITY IS SATASFIED LOL
the main character also sticks to the usual isekai main character trope, a shut in bum that gets teleported to another world LOL, however i liked how he quickly realizes that this is real and that some things are just different to how the game was as this is reality, he also has his own morals in this world that don't tie him to just humanity as seeing the evil acts they are committing and that the majority of humans are like that he quickly choses the morally good sides of things (i'm interested to find out more about how all these humans are scum LoL,
the writing is good, not TOO complex to the point its odd to read but not overly simple, the author also doesn't force feed information he reveals it when it relates to the events which makes you feel like there's an ever growing world, i also like how there's multiple languages
the magic system of skills and magic is also very interesting and i wonder if there are other powers out there?
It really does have potential and I can't wait to see what happens next, keep writing and good luck you have our support
Warrior_okamiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This work presents a particularly compelling approach by shifting the narrative focus toward RPG monsters, offering them a more humanized and emotionally resonant portrayal. Such a perspective not only adds depth to traditionally antagonistic figures but also challenges the reader's moral assumptions within familiar game worlds. The storytelling is engaging from the outset, drawing the reader into a world where even skeletons-such as those in Dark Souls-evoke empathy rather than mere hostility.
It's a narrative that lingers, making one reconsider the act of combat in these fictional universes.
#1fantasyfanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
the story only has 7 chapters so far but the synopsis was very intriguing and so i started reading and although i can tell that we're not even 10% of the way into the story i can feel that this has the potential; to be a very deep, long and interesting story that may tackle a lot of interesting themes and challenges for the characters, can't wait to see the rest of the story, keep it up.
i like how the story also sticks to very similar anime and isekai tropes that we know and love, the main character who's a bit of a loser ends up in another world, he's special in this world and gains strength and power quickly. however i like how he had a realization quite a few times that this isn't exactly like the game, it's real and it's darker, things have happened that the main character is obviously against which causes him to easily cast aside one of his goals of becoming a human when he is forced to choose a side.
personal opinion that doesn't really change anything from the story, but i also love how we have a brown skinned main character in this story, we need more black characters to add to these, manga/anime/light novel tier lists LOL
the SPAG of this story isn't exceptional, but if you expect Exceptional on a website where people are probably self publishing and may not have the resources to have every last thing checked then you'll find alot of works that may not suit you. however thats not to say the SPAG is bad at all, its not like a child has wrote it, its what you'd expect from a new author and it gives the story its own little vibe
i also like how we are not force fed information and we learn more as the story and world grows
keep up the good work, i hope you find success and we will keep on reading.
JaxonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love the setting and the way the story pulls you in right from the start. It's got this cool mix of gaming fantasy and real-life drama that keeps you hooked.
it has a lot of potential.
The only thing I would recommend for the author is to work on the paragraphing, for example, in the third chapter the first paragraph is long and could be broken into multiple smaller ones, but that is a minor thing that's easily fixed.
Keep writing :)
XdrakeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Overall i enjoy the story so far. I like the way the author introduces new species and gives us insight into their way of life. They’re not just there to be cannon fodder for the MC, they feel real if that makes sense.
I also thought the skeleton choice was different and im looking forward to seeing what evolutions lie ahead. I am a sucker for isekai so i couldn’t pass up on this after reading the title and synopsis and i was not disappointed.
considering that this is the author’s first story, i sense a lot of potential
chippubo12Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really like the unique concept of the story. In a sea of repetitive and monotonous isekai stuff, this one kinda stands out to me.
Although it started off a bit rough, I have noticed significant improvement from the author as I progress through the chapters so thumb up for that!
I am also pretty impressed by the detail put into explaining the power system within this world. It adds depth and complexity to the story, making it all the more captivating.