Every touch burns me

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Description

Ivy Ashford never believed in monsters. Until she started dreaming like one.

Senior year was supposed to be about prom dresses, graduation photos, and maybe-just maybe-getting over Theo and his perfect life.But then he showed up.The man on the motorcycle.Tattooed, brooding, dangerous. Watching her like he knows every secret she hasn't even discovered yet.

She feels it the moment their eyes meet: something ancient coils in her blood, wild and restless. A hunger she can't name.But he keeps his distance, like he's afraid of what might happen if he gets too close.

Until he snaps.

Because Ivy isn't just a girl.And he isn't just a man.There's a bond between them that's older than time-and when the truth comes out, the burn between them might be the only thing that saves her... or destroys them both.

Dark. Addictive. Forbidden.Every touch I burn is a slow-burn paranormal romance full of fated mates, danger, and desire that refuses to be tamed.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Rm202217

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 559

Chapters(4 total)

What readers say about Every touch burns me

“Every Touch Burns Me begins with an atmospheric setup centered around Ivy Ashford, a high school senior whose life begins to unravel after a strange encounter with a tattooed, motorcycle-riding stranger. The story taps into the familiar tones of paranormal…”
NagulanRoyal Road3.0 / 5

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NagulanRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Every Touch Burns Me begins with an atmospheric setup centered around Ivy Ashford, a high school senior whose life begins to unravel after a strange encounter with a tattooed, motorcycle-riding stranger. The story taps into the familiar tones of paranormal romance — fate, mystery, and the feeling that something just beneath the surface is about to change everything.
The prose sets a somber, introspective mood, and there's an intentional sense of emotional distance in the way Ivy perceives her surroundings. While this adds to the mystery, it also makes it harder to fully connect with her as a character in this opening chapter. A bit more grounding — concrete details about the school setting, or Ivy’s relationships — could help readers invest more quickly.
There’s potential here, especially in the chemistry that’s hinted between Ivy and the mysterious stranger. However, the pacing feels a bit slow for a first chapter. Some dialogue or internal thought that reveals Ivy’s emotional state would help make her feel more human and relatable.
The story has promise, especially for fans of slow-burn romance and light supernatural twists. With more character depth and plot movement, it could definitely grow into a compelling read.
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