ES Organic Dungeon

Self-Published

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Description

What would happen if dungeon couldn't manipulate the earth around it? Or what would happen to it without an all-mighty system to help it grow properly?

Join our brave hero in his journey!

Discord server link:

https://discord.gg/anXeQu2ATX

Second Book/Spinoff: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/47917/es-modern-dungeon

The story is on temporary hiatus, I will start uploading after others make novels in the same universe or when the story is at least 1 year old.

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2021
Author: Bishop of the Lamb

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 57
Views: 19,116

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

MxCrossbrandRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So, there's objectively a lot wrong with a lot of this story. Everything from grammar and pacing to things like character motivation and problems with power creep each feel like they need either a total overhaul or at least a touch-up.
However, I don't care.
For one, it feels like the story is being translated into english from another language, so I don't mind the more structural issues based on that.
As for the everything else, the story has this sense of self-deprecation that makes it hard to have issues with it. The writer did something clever with how he/she framed the relationship between the dungeon and the world's admin. Whenever the dungeon does something that should upend the balance of the world in some way, I can almost see the admin trying to figure out how he/she/it's going to deal with it this time. This dynamic lends a sense of comedy to the story's more absurd power-fantasy elements.
I'm not sure I can recommend following this story in the serialized format implicit to stories on this site, but if you have an afternoon free and enjoy dungeons, LITRPGs, or both, give it a look.